this is about a man in a lonely life that had no friends no family and a dead end job. but one day while at home a portal is made where it goes he doesnt know but is entriged the rest is in the story....
this is about a man in a lonely life that had no friends no family and a dead end job. but one day while at home a portal is made where it goes he doesnt know but is entriged the rest is in the story....
I think you should edit this and add capitals, you seem to jump right into the action as well
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this seems very generic, i havent even started reading,but i'll give it a shot and see if it differs from anyone elses HiE
yeah... u need to work on grammar alot more... alot. story wise, it seems like any other story, u shuld try and make it unique somehow.
THE GRAMMAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wunderbar!
It's a generic Human in Equestria story!
im very sorry i will edit this story
265626 let me guess you didnt like it did ya
265611 new story is out
lol
there ya go hope you injoyed
I liked the story but I did notice a couple of spelling errors though.