“In order to rule, you must first learn how to submit," Cadence told Twilight Sparkle. Thrown into the required "Princess Training," Twilight must learn obedience and submission from the other Princesses [HEAVY D/s]
3158410 No, it's not rape. D/s is Dominant/submissive. That in itself is not rape, just a very dark, erotic way of expression. That's fine though, it's not everyone's cup of tea. Hehe.
3158426 Thanks, that's appreciated. I've followed you as my reminder to read some of your work, too. It's midnight over here and my mind is slipping into that sleepy, incoherent territory, lol.
Oh man, never enough of this. And though the opening was brief this looks higher quality than most of the fetish stories on fimfiction (not exactly a high bar, though).
3158565 That actually means a lot, thank you. I've been writing for about 11 years straight so the comment about quality is a real reward to read <3 I guess that means I can't let the quality of my work slide, then!
3158673 Get used to disappointment, sweetie. I'm four chapters into this already <3 3158681 Thanks. I'm a very harsh editor on myself and I don't believe in releasing half-assed work, so I release what I believe is the best that I can churn out. If it helps increase the quality then I think I would have done a good job around here C; 3158587 Oh, yes. Twi better hang on tight while she can, things are going to get going real fast, real soon
3158414 It may not be rape, but it's certainly kidnapping and betrayal so far, as far as Twi is concerned. How could Celestia hurt her like that? The poor thing is frightened out of her mind.
I will read this. Probably not right now, it's 7 AM, I am DONE, thank your deity or deities or other choice of things, with my shift, and need, and will have, my rest, just as soon as I finish one or two or three or five other things. Still. Being a switch? Submissive Twi is a favorite of mine. So's dominant Twi. So yes, kiddies.... I will be reading and following this closely.
3159447 Yes, you have my permission. Thank you. We all have different cups of tea. Mine is just flavored a little darker, I think. 3159171 I know she's frightened, but do you think she'd willingly put herself there outside of Princess Celestia's orders? Even if Princess Celestia gave her a direct order, there'd still be all sorts of conflict 3159158 Naughty Silver, don't give too much away <3 I see you've gotten my message, btw. Nice to see you here.
3159600 Well yes, but that's just it, Celestia did order her to go to canterlot, and then she abducts her. What's up with that? The only logical reason is to scare the living crap out of her, I get that the idea is for Twilight to submit, but this doesn't seem to serve that purpose. She's just being mean, which isn't really like Celestia at all. Just my thoughts.
Hm. Has a lot of passive voice that drags the prose down a bit if you ask me, but the plot so far is very interesting. Also more than a bit telly in parts but I suppose it's forgivable since the pacing speed payoff they give. Overall I'm a bit neutral but curious enough to continue.
nope.
3158392 Nope?
3158398
not my cup of tea. really, gave it a try but really not my thing. mostly of the dark tag mixed with sex, makes it seem like rape to me.
3158410 No, it's not rape. D/s is Dominant/submissive. That in itself is not rape, just a very dark, erotic way of expression. That's fine though, it's not everyone's cup of tea. Hehe.
3158414
eh everybody has different fetishes
will follow for future works,
3158426 Thanks, that's appreciated. I've followed you as my reminder to read some of your work, too. It's midnight over here and my mind is slipping into that sleepy, incoherent territory, lol.
My god this is awesome
3158504 Why thank you. I'll probably update this in the morning, as I'm currently on chapter four. It only gets better from here <3
3158535
Yay
Oh man, never enough of this. And though the opening was brief this looks higher quality than most of the fetish stories on fimfiction (not exactly a high bar, though).
3158565 That actually means a lot, thank you. I've been writing for about 11 years straight so the comment about quality is a real reward to read <3 I guess that means I can't let the quality of my work slide, then!
My my my what a way to start us off. I can tell this has good things in store for us. Sorry Twi, said good things might come at your expense.
I will disapointed in you if you continue this
There aren't enough quality D/s fics on this site, especially involving the princesses and twilight. Hope this changes that.
3158673 Get used to disappointment, sweetie. I'm four chapters into this already <3
3158681 Thanks. I'm a very harsh editor on myself and I don't believe in releasing half-assed work, so I release what I believe is the best that I can churn out. If it helps increase the quality then I think I would have done a good job around here C;
3158587 Oh, yes. Twi better hang on tight while she can, things are going to get going real fast, real soon
3158716sorry missed typed I meant I would dsapointed if you DONT keep this going
3158795 HAHA! One word can make all the difference, you know C;
Intriguing premise. I'll have to come back and check this out after you have a few more chapters posted.
spoiler alert , this one gets jaw dropping good.
I do apologize Mistress however I can't help it.
3158414 It may not be rape, but it's certainly kidnapping and betrayal so far, as far as Twi is concerned. How could Celestia hurt her like that? The poor thing is frightened out of her mind.
3159171 If your being serious, I'm afraid you may be in the wrong genre. ( if your playing along then I feel silly)
Also not my cup of tea. But Twilestia is Bestia, so I'll be adding this to the folder "clopfics" with your permission.
I will read this. Probably not right now, it's 7 AM, I am DONE, thank your deity or deities or other choice of things, with my shift, and need, and will have, my rest, just as soon as I finish one or two or three or five other things. Still. Being a switch? Submissive Twi is a favorite of mine. So's dominant Twi. So yes, kiddies.... I will be reading and following this closely.
This probably one of the few things which make Blueblood glad he was born a dude...
3159447 Yes, you have my permission. Thank you. We all have different cups of tea. Mine is just flavored a little darker, I think.
3159171 I know she's frightened, but do you think she'd willingly put herself there outside of Princess Celestia's orders? Even if Princess Celestia gave her a direct order, there'd still be all sorts of conflict
3159158 Naughty Silver, don't give too much away <3 I see you've gotten my message, btw. Nice to see you here.
3159600 Well yes, but that's just it, Celestia did order her to go to canterlot, and then she abducts her. What's up with that? The only logical reason is to scare the living crap out of her, I get that the idea is for Twilight to submit, but this doesn't seem to serve that purpose. She's just being mean, which isn't really like Celestia at all. Just my thoughts.
3159600 is fine. This should get you more tea sales, if we're to extend the metaphor even further.
Oh god Jesper, I told you to choose ONE fic I had to read today, and you picked this?
Oh dear, oh dear. What have i gotten myself into?
3165243 same here were am i going
Hm. Has a lot of passive voice that drags the prose down a bit if you ask me, but the plot so far is very interesting. Also more than a bit telly in parts but I suppose it's forgivable since the pacing speed payoff they give. Overall I'm a bit neutral but curious enough to continue.