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...I'm gonna hafta advertise this story to people at some point. The sheer lack of attention it gets is undeserved.
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By all means, please do so.
That story is just... Goddamn, I'm at the lack of words. The 'voice' of Five Stars (I mean, the overall style of the story) is enchanting.
My only gripe is that, I really, really doubt that such pornographic text would be published in any kind of a newspaper.
But still, thumbs up, fav, and 'email updates' checkbox checked Can't wait to read more!
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Thank you very much.
It's a valid point, and one I grappled with for a while. Originally, my idea was that she'd be writing 'letters to penthouse' type stories, but decided that would sharply limit who would see it. If she and Platinum really wanted to reach a wider audience, they would choose a more mainstream venue.
The two magazines she's writing through are Tabloids along the line of the New York Post, say, which are known for slightly lurid stuff. I agree they wouldn't do it *now*, but 15 or so years in the future when this roughly takes place... they might be pushing it, but it might just be possible, particularly if the more explicit content is hidden behind a subscription firewall or something.
There is a reason Platinum and Five Stars insisted these be uncensored that will be revealed in the course of the story. Also keep in mind that the explicitness isn't as big a deal on the pony side of the portal; it's the Gentlemen themselves that are the bigger controversy.
More is definitely coming. Thanks for commenting!
3639387 when i saw the first two chapters, i thought that the storry would suck huge DICK. then when the other chapters came out, i slapped myself unconcious and woke up to type this: YOU ARE FREAKING AMAZING. So, do ever plan to introduce Five Stars to the Gentlemen for Mares?
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Why thank you!
And to answer your question... yes, that's the idea. I'm trying to show how she became a trainer and the pony she is today, but her introduction to humans and Gentlemen for Mares is still a while away. Hopefully you'll enjoy the ride getting there.
I find the lack of views and subsequent upvotes disturbing...
Cheer me up, damn it! I just slogged my way across chapter three of Fallout Equestria. Ponies were shot, ammo was collected, and a miserable time was had by all. I'd like a description of aftersex that doesn't involve crying and heavy bleeding now!
Oh thank Celestia... lets do this!
Well fuck!
Good on you, sister!
It is understood by those in power, clerical and secular, that sex is power. The powerful only want sex discussed in the way they see fit and to the ends they desire. The government needs more low-cost worker drones to maintain the infrastructure; the Church needs more converts to fill the coffers, and feminists need to drive a wedge between themselves and the rest of society to maintain the hivemind and give themselves a hammer to beat men with for further outlandish demands.
Glad I could help, Five Stars! I'll be here when you need me again.
Oh dear.
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Today is not going well for my face; I may have developed a permanent cringe.
Now we're talking!
What? They're zebras so it doesn't count!
Chapter Four: The Drunkening.
Ahh, the vertical variation on the swirl! Very noiiiiice!
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This wasn't a good chapter to use as a chaser for FoE! Ugh.
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This trick was totally working until I realized it made me easier to mount! Oy vey...
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Oh for the love of Chewbacca let that be the end of it! Roseluck and Lily will finish the review while I go outside and scream for awhile.
Wait, what am I doing here? It's a stallion and mare having sex!
I know, right? This is a perfect time for you to open your horizons a bit. Don't worry, Rose won't let the bad colt harm you. He's for me anyway. That's a good filly!
(If she were anypony else...)
Rose? Isn't this that mare you look up to as some sort of earth pony goddess of sex or something? Why isn't she just throwing her tail aside and offering the cowcolt a chance to stop and smell the flowers?
Stallions aren't quite as easy as mares are, sadly. A mare like you probably could pull that off with another mare if you had the horseapples, but stallions are always looking for something in return.
I'm... honored you think so, Rose. But is that all you do? Offer one a drink and let them... You know...
Depends on what you want. You need to buy his time. That could mean buying him a drink, picking up his hobby so you can hang out with him, rescuing him from a hydra... you get the idea. The hydra method isn't recommended, but it is close to 100% that you'll be getting some action! Even if you're the most beautiful mare in existence, and make a good trophy to satisfy his raging ego, you still need to provide a service.
So you go into the exchange at a massive disadvantage and have to service the guy until you get what you want from him? That sounds truly awful.
Yeah, pretty much. That's how the sexual marketplace works...
Ooooooh, I gotta remember that one! That right there, Lily, is why she's the MARE!
Looks like she's winning, doesn't it?
I'm about to win myself!
Rose... ewww! That's lewd!
Eeeeeee! She's going to get some, Lily! Isn't nature wonderful to behold?
(You're wonderful to behold, Rose. Mmm) I, uh, sure. I guess...
Very good advice. It saves time to just get him to say yes or no. You aren't trying to chisel a statue from marble here.
I'm not sure that's the kind of experience I'd like to have!
He's deflecting... that motherbucker! I've read his book, Lily. He's trying to deescalate the situation so that he won't have sex, but can't bring himself to outright say no. Five Stars is going to have to lay her game down flat to bring that stallion to heel!
Eep!
Yeah, filly! Yeah! Take that stallion and chain him to the bed!
Rose I should le— Why are you holding me!?
Because you need to see this immaculate performance finished!
Oh ho ho hoooo yayeaaaah! Sealed the deal like a pro!
Rose, I can smell your... um.
Smells like victory doesn't it?
Funny, I've never had that happen. I like to tell ponies, below my libido is more libido.
(sigh) You hate to lose a stallion like that. A good lay and a genuinely nice colt, but nice colts are few and far between. That's why I say it's cheaper to rent happiness than it is to buy. So what did you think Lily?
Well, I didn't drop dead, so it could have been worse? (Celestia, she smells good!)
That's the spirit!
Edit from 4/2/2019:
Past Aficionado you poor son of a bitch. Pouring one out for... myself.
You know, it was pretty obvious who it was, but this is a nice touch. I like it. Good job. You get a cookie.
Damn...! This story...! I'm loving it! Awesome job so far!
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Thanks! This was my very first story, and in some ways is still my favorite for its unusual format and main character.
I hope Braeburn's issue had to do with him being in love with Little Strongheart ❤
Oops, found some comments I never replied to. Let me fix that now:
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Nope, and sorry if you’re disappointed. The short answer is, he’s gay, and she really put him on the spot that night. And then he not only enjoyed it, but by performing oral sex on him so well, she took away the one thing a gay stallion could offer him that a mare couldn’t. All that taken together is why he had so much trouble afterwards.