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You should use the picture from the new mlp comic where luna gives big mac a kiss.
Really nice beginning. Can't wait for the next parts.
...Eeyup.
3140381What?!? Whwere is it?!
3140483 It`s in the My Little Pony, Friendship is Magic COMIC #10
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Eheh, aw yeah.
A most excellent start. We are intrigued.
can't wait to see more
Tracked and fav'd.
I'm rather pleased with the serious scope you gave Luna's powers: there's a great deal of untapped potential in just how powerful both Celestia and Luna actually are.
You mean 'ponies.'
Looks interesting enough to warrant my attention. I'll stick around and see where this goes.
Oh Thank Jesus! Another LunaMac Story! I have been DYING to get My Fix! I can only hope with the recent IDW comics, more of these will be made! Thank you so much - I love you!
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Eheh, Aw Yis! Saved.
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Glad to help.
3142019 Ah-hah. Well spotted, thank you. I need to keep reminding myself about that. That and any reference to "hands" as only Lyra would know what those are!
3140381 Good idea. :) Done!
3144572 No worries, it's the most common mistake in pony fanfiction. Kinda like thinking AJ is Southern.
Oh, sweet! Did you actually use the image I posted for the new cover? That's awesome!
ok, ya got me.
im intrigued. aaaand another to my fav list. somehow i think i shant be let down.
Loving it! I would space the paragraphs out a tad, but other then that! A fun read to watch!
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My have yourself a new follower, my friend. Ususally, I read a couple stories. I wasn't even halfway finished when I favorited this story, and I usually wait for the conclusion, or until I have read to the current chapter. I have some advice. This story can be great if, and only IF, you don't rush it, and plan carefully. Keep up the good work. I don't ususally do this, but allow me to crank the moustaches up to 11.
Not bad. Few things off, but a good start.
There's a trope about that.
Interesting so far.
Glad to find someone else that spells it McIntosh. He an apple, not a computer.
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But AJ calls him Big Mac so it would have and A.
This bothers me when reading stories But not enough to make me stop reading.
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I counted the to make sure you put the correct amount. You did so heres a yay!
Her name is just Applejack, not Ms Apple
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What does the word willing mean?
4297583 The official spelling is McIntosh. At least according to Faust and she made him so she should know. Big Mac probably makes more sense to say than Big Mc, which makes him sound like some kind of rapper.
First chapter went pretty good
This story has alot of potential already and I can't wait to see how everything plays out