3376195 Chapter 7 in particular is horrifying to me because it's completely out of place in the entire story. Same with 8. I started this story fully intending it to be a clopfic, not an emotional, tragic/dark drama, and the fact that I let the story evolve into such a genre is embarrassing. I am glad I wrote it, make no mistake - everyone has to start somewhere - but I believe my writing career got off to a shaky start with this piece is all.
This is some serious feels here. Wow.
>This is morbidly embarrassing to look back on. Dear god...
oh lighten up you lol....
what's so wrong with it? aside from everyone getting knocked out and reawakening every 5 seconds i mean.....
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Chapter 7 in particular is horrifying to me because it's completely out of place in the entire story. Same with 8. I started this story fully intending it to be a clopfic, not an emotional, tragic/dark drama, and the fact that I let the story evolve into such a genre is embarrassing. I am glad I wrote it, make no mistake - everyone has to start somewhere - but I believe my writing career got off to a shaky start with this piece is all.