This is the single greatest thing that I have ever read in my life! Every other fan fic pales in comparison to this wonderful masterpiece! Bravo! You nailed everypony's personality to a tee! The writing is so profound! You've truly touched my soul, and for that, I thank you.
I give this story FIVE APPLEJACK'S OUT OF FIVE!

CAN'T TELL IF TROLLING
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OR TERRIBLE AUTHOR

Ugh, this is not even a good My Immortal ripoff. 0/10 on troll attempt.

This is awesome!!! Don't bother reading this, instead listen to MicTheMicrophone read it dramatically:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ByRP9gOpw7s&list=UU-tNtuwi4GpvLvTB3Jvd3EQ&index=7&feature=plcp

Omg when mic read this i almost died in my seat it was that funny

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Huh, I remember there being more Justin Beiber. Oh well.

I... I feel soiled for being paid to narrate this....