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A falling out. An argument. Blatant misuse of magic. Whatever the reason was, it has long since been shrouded in mystery. While the rest of the world has turned, Equestria has stagnated, haunted by the ghosts of the past.

But... perhaps the ghost is needed to save the haunted.


Cover art used with permission from TellabArt. Original image found here.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 16 )

Well, this is pretty cool. I'll be following.

Her marks in combat were rough,

*extraneous space

Title involves Twilight Sparkle...
Mysterious silver unicorn, in a library, three hundred years into the future...
Story description includes ghosts...

Hmm... My jump-to-conclusion senses have come to a conclusion. I'll just have to see if it pans out.

Fun idea. Looking forward for the next chapters.

Daww. I got it wrong already. Oh well.

Not been doing anything for the last five years? Finally collecting on your vacation time are you, Celestia?
Well, we won't see her for another decade.

oh wow, i actually put this on my read-later list last night, and completely didn't notice who the author was.

Oh, well hello, Princess Celestia! Fancy meeting you here. I wasn't expecting you.
Ha ha.

Boy, cutie marks are pretty detailed here, aren't they? Just looking at them, you can tell if someone ever stole something, how they felt about it, what they did with what they stole, and how likely they are to steal from whoever employs them.

How do thieves manage to stay out of prison?

which meant she spent an absorbent amount of time by the punch and cakes until Sir Dew gave her one of his classic cautious stares.

*exorbitant ? Maybe? I don't know, absorbent might work.

“Presenting Ironworks, apprentice to Cold Cast, the Royal Blacksmith. His..”

*His..."

"Quicksilver, you're graduating early. I would have waited until later to tell you, but something vague and disastrous is about to happen. Take this scroll. Now, you must promise me."
"What?"
"Promise me!"
"I don't know what you want!"
"Swear you'll make at least one friend, Quicksilver! Our lives depend on you having a social life! Promise me!"

Oh, mysterious old teacher folk. Will you ever stop being amusing and / or frustrating with your cryptic knowledge?

"Twinkle Swirl."

I totally see where this is going now.

Twilight went back in time and fell in love with Starswirl the Bearded, and now their kid is running around mucking up the timeline.
Obviously.

@Redrick

Thanks for the heads up. I guess it was missed in the editing process.

@Redric

Thanks for the catch :3

Glad you're all enjoying it!

Good so far but I'm confused as to what this story is about. Twilight keeps getting mentioned but it seems to not be important. I hope it'll become clear later.

Ditto.

But I do still like it.

Good story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm a bit lost with all of the different pov's but it'll get better as I read more.

Did your family ever friend that was introduced to you as an Aunt or Uncle?

*missing some words here.

Glass boxes are fine. The mimes inside them, though...
Well, they're fine too, but it makes a good joke.

It's a crime we don't have airship travel these days. In any event, I enjoy these three characters and the bit of world building going on, but I'm also eager for the title question to come into play within the story.

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