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The Truth About Trixie

Trixie takes Twilight into the ruins of a long forgotten shrine in order to find a treasure that will change history. Twilight is about to learn the truth about not only alicorns, but Trixie as well.

A/N: I'm working on improving my grammar, so if there are any mistakes feel free to point them out.

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Jphyper

Jphyper #1 · Aug 12th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Since you ended the chapter before it was over, I'll have to track it temporarily to see where it goes.

By that, I meant that many authors, when they first submit a fanfic, have a tendency to make the first chapter too small, and that's what you did here. The story doesn't progress enough for anyone to tell if it's worth sticking around for. It's a very annoying habit to have. Would you be able to tell if a video game is good by playing it for less than ten seconds? No, you would not. It's the same thing here.

crusnikjab

crusnikjab #2 · Aug 12th, 2013 · 1 · 1 ·

3031158 I actually only intended to write that one chapter but since publishing it, I've come up with other ideas for the story. So I am going to write at least one more chapter to it. It should be out later this week.

Blackwolf2