Six months after the assassination on Cadence, Shining Armor and their newborn daugther, something is brought back to life, to once again walk the streets of the Crystal Empire, to take revenge upon those that killed everypony he loved.
3131764 Obviously , but one thing I noticed will a few of the Protagonists in the Crow universe is they all have different levels of sarcasm going on, usually before they kill someone they're after, but there's still that tragic underlay there. The other thing I noticed is that they also seem to snap out of the 'insanity' phase when they realize why they have been brought back. Sorry for going on, I'm a huge Crow fan . Is Shining going to don the make-up to hide the scars (even though he has a white coat...)?
All I'm thinking about is: what the hay is Twilight doing with the murderer of her brother? Is she under mind control? Does she not know who Flash is and what he did? Is Flash even the one who killed Shining?
I went back to read the second chapter and the only one who was described with detail was the green stallion who killed Skyla. Did I miss something? Wouldn't be the first time
3132452 You didn't miss anything Twilight has no idea it was him, since he was wearing a cloak and hood, like the others, when the murder took place.. don't worry, there will be much more about this couple later in the story
3132040 No, Shining won't put on any make-up.. For two reasons;
Unlike Shining, Eric had a reason to wear the make-up of a mime. That mask and all. Shining, while he would probably look awesome like it, doesn't have any reason to wear it.
That's why I went with the idea of scars, like in Crow Salvation. They make more sense when applied to his own personal story; for as long as he walks as an undead, they will serve as reminder that there is no going back, not until it's all over.
3133464 I think this is the most rushed and quickly written story I've done.. and yet people love it But when I spend weeks on other stories, no one gives one or two shits..
3133527 Well, even if it's rushed, I think your story is pretty well done so far. I like how you've implemented the feel of the movies into the MLP universe. And I'm sorry to hear that about your other stories.
Shining FTW
3131303 And I think this was the worst chapter I've ever written
OH HELL YEAH!!!!
Best thing to EVER happen to Flash
3131604 I take it you're not a fan of him?
And Shining is far from done with him..
3131621 It disgusts me that Knighty gave him a character tag, even though he is from Equestria Girls...
Yet, there is STILL no Apple Family tag
Oh... You gonna force him to watch Barney and Friends?
3131634 There's a character tag of him? Huh, I had no idea..
If only it was that simple.. Let's just say there will be pain.. If you liked this little chapter, I'm sure you'll be most pleased with what's to come
3131669 DAMN YOU! Quit teasing me and get to writing! NAO!!!
3131692 Can't help it; I love that someone wants to read more
He's getting more Eric like just needs some of that dry sarcastic stuff he says in the comic and he'll be spot on
3131755 Yeah, his sanity has officially begun to fade But keep in mind; he's not Eric, he's Shining - completely different
I wanted to see Shining to go all Adam Chaplin. If you don't know what's that, check out the trailer for it.
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Obviously , but one thing I noticed will a few of the Protagonists in the Crow universe is they all have different levels of sarcasm going on, usually before they kill someone they're after, but there's still that tragic underlay there. The other thing I noticed is that they also seem to snap out of the 'insanity' phase when they realize why they have been brought back. Sorry for going on, I'm a huge Crow fan .
Is Shining going to don the make-up to hide the scars (even though he has a white coat...)?
All I'm thinking about is: what the hay is Twilight doing with the murderer of her brother? Is she under mind control? Does she not know who Flash is and what he did? Is Flash even the one who killed Shining?
I went back to read the second chapter and the only one who was described with detail was the green stallion who killed Skyla. Did I miss something? Wouldn't be the first time
I love what your doing with Shining armor as the crow.
Keep it up.
3132452 You didn't miss anything Twilight has no idea it was him, since he was wearing a cloak and hood, like the others, when the murder took place.. don't worry, there will be much more about this couple later in the story
3133401 Ouch, poor Twilight.
Now I'm wondering whether or not Flash actually loved her or if he just wanted to show off
3133440 You'll find out soon enough Remember, I try to release a chapter every 3-4 days
3133452 I can hardly wait
3-4 days? Damn. I can barely write a single chapter every 2-3 months...
3132016 Holy shit, that looks like an insane movie Don't worry, Shining isn't done yet
3132040 No, Shining won't put on any make-up.. For two reasons;
Unlike Shining, Eric had a reason to wear the make-up of a mime. That mask and all. Shining, while he would probably look awesome like it, doesn't have any reason to wear it.
That's why I went with the idea of scars, like in Crow Salvation. They make more sense when applied to his own personal story; for as long as he walks as an undead, they will serve as reminder that there is no going back, not until it's all over.
3133464 I think this is the most rushed and quickly written story I've done.. and yet people love it But when I spend weeks on other stories, no one gives one or two shits..
3133527 Well, even if it's rushed, I think your story is pretty well done so far. I like how you've implemented the feel of the movies into the MLP universe. And I'm sorry to hear that about your other stories.
The crow was my fav movie it was awesome thanks for this crossover
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Not exactly what I'd expect from the fury-driven emmissary of the damned, but hey, I won't complain.
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So much haaaate for Flashy.