After a traumatic experience with an animals life Fluttershy could have saved, the shy yellow mare tries to repress her memories in her nursery turned sanctuary. However this sanctuary turns nightmare as one of the filly mare friends interrupt her.
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You know what man, I somewhat agree with you on this. Had I known earlier how long and what emotional strings I was trying to strum when writing this, I would have:
1. Made it a lot shorter (Less filler chapters)
2. Made it in a first person perspective (From Fluttershy's/Twilight's POV)
3. Worked on the begining of the story a bit more.
I've already reached the point of no return, but I'm going to keep on going and see what happens
Please get an editor.
The writing is kind of awkward and rough.
On a side note, interesting to see how Fluttershy feels about her adult foal tendencies.
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Haha, I have an editor
He's just taking his time catching up, it's a long story.
Also I'm aware it's awkward to read. I kinda screwed up the pacing a while back ago and as I've stated earlier it's not really anything I can fix.
Also thanks! I tried to make this story more descriptive of how an infantalist feels. In my personal opinion, once my editor get's to my other story "Pinkie Pie's Obsession"; it'll be the better of the two. Quite frankly, I'm actually a bit tired of working with Fluttershy and Twilight. At the moment I'm working on something else right now involving AJ and Brae Burn which is on a whole different topic than this story
Super genial, fluttershy a un sacré role, vivement la suite
Alright everypony! I'm sorry, but the new chapter of Fluttercrinkle is delayed 'til tomorrow!
I've been trying to make sure it's just right and I think some more time to revise it would be nice. So it'll be out tomorrow!