• Member Since 24th Jan, 2012
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lubu602


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If Twilight knew what awaited her inside the strange house of the strange stallion, she would move away from Ponyville altogether, but there's no use in wishing to change the past, but she must fight to preserve her future. Now, not even the magic of friendship can save her.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Okay...
Kind of fast paced but I like it anyway.

And then I see Beating the Heat at the bottom and the sadness at this story is replace with joy..... Sorry :ajsleepy:

Pretty good so far though.

Hey Bro Sup with you lololol anyway dude you've got a kick ass story startin here meet me during lunch sometime so we can brainstorm more ideas and make this the best story it can be but again great job so far man creative writing really helped you (and so does Mrs. Schwind)!!!:rainbowlaugh:

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