"We fought and this time I won banishing you to the moon, but, mom and dad helped, mom quept you warm and dad protected you from the evil forces. I asked if I could help, they said there was a way for me to help, I had to keep ruling like we did together, protecting the kingdom from evil. But that wasn't all, every night, after raising the moon, I would fly up to the tallest mountain, and call out your name and think warm thoughts of my day and times we spent together, because, even in the darkest places, the smallest of hearts still glow brilliently. I never nnew if the got to you or if you heard or felt me, but, no matter what I never stop trying, or beliving." as Celestia started crying as the thoughts ran throught.
" Tia, i heard you and it was like you were right there beside me, they did reach me! All your thoughts and words reached me very well!!!!" as Luna started crying as well.
Luna and Celestia spent a nice evening talking about the story and how happy they were to see each other. When it was time for bed Celestia asked Luna
" Luna..."
" Yes Tia?" replied Luna
" I was wondering if we c c could could..."
" We could what?" asked Luna while jumpping into her bed.
" Wow! This bed is super soft and cumfie, way cumfier than on the moon!!! " said Luna
" Glad you like it Lulu. I was wondering if we could slep together in your bed? " asked Celestia
" My bed is to small for the both of us, Tia. " replied Luna
Celestia made a sad face because she really wanted to slep with her beloved sister, it's been a thousand years and she missed her alot.
" But yours isn't! " said Luna in joy of being with her sister for the night.
Celestia gave a happy smile, and so did Luna. And so they slep happyly in the wounderfull night.
You want someone to tell you if you see any typos? Well let's start with the description...
This is how it can look...
You seem a little young, so hopefully you don't take this the wrong way, but...your writing could use a little work. Don't worry if it doesn't look the best right now, you'll get better as time goes on. Unfortunately, because it's going to be so difficult to read, I'm not going to take the time to look over your story, sorry. Best of luck in the future though.
I wood like this awthur to bekum bettar at riteing.
The reason why my spelling is really bad is because I go to a french school. we only have english classes, the rest is in french. Sorry!!!!
I note down the corrections to changes them, I remember them better. thx for the help.
2902927 I go to a french school so only my english class helps my english, the rest is french.