“That’s it for me… No more Berries before bedtime”
“Who are you talking to mister? OH! Are you playing a game? I love games! My favorite is-”
“Don’t mind her, she does that to everypony.”
“…I need some sleep, I swear that Ponyta was just talking to me. Well, if there are Ponyta, they must be looking for a battle.” Red then Proceeded to dig in his bag until he found a completely red ball with black on the sides. “Go Mew!” This confused all others in the room, as nothing came out of the ball, or at least, that’s what it looked like.
“What the Hay is that?” Everyone looked at the thing that Rainbow Dash had pointed at, and saw something that looked like a cross between a cat and a fetus playing with Fluttershy.
“Fluttershy! Get out of there! That thing could be dangerous!”
Fluttershy ignored them and began to try to soothe it to sleep, but failed. Red then walked up, noticing Mew’s unwillingness to attack these creatures. “Okay Mew, you don’t have to attack them… unless provoked. Those 4 look like the leaders here, so read their minds to find out what we need to know, then relay the info to me. Okay?” Mew floated there for a second, before nodding, and floating over to the princesses.
(3 hours later)
“Okay, lets see if I got everything right. You,” Red pointed to Celestia “Are the princess who raises the sun and have been ruling for thousands of years. You,” Pointed to Luna “Were evil for about a thousand years, and were free by the elements of harmony, used by these six” points to the mane six “They have saved your world 5 times since obtaining the elements” Red then points at Discord “You brought me here, this land is called equestria. There is something big happening every other Tuesday. Am I missing anything?”
“Not that we can think of.”
Red sighed, then said “This day just got a whole lot more interesting.”
I WANT MORE
2891770 Its in the works right now
This alone took me about 2 hours and 40 minutes!
I love pokémon cross overs. I hope to see more soon, keep up the amazing work!
this is pretty awesome keep it up
I kinda wish you kept Red as his original mute self. Eh, it's still a good fic so far.
2892020 Sorry, find that kinda hard to do in a romance fic... otherwise he would be mute.
2892029Wait, this is Romance?
... please don't do the whole "instantly falls in love" thing. Please don't.
2892036 Not a chance, not a snowball chance in hell
2892045Huh, and here I thought I was the only one who ever used that saying.
2892084 I know at least three people who use that phrase.
2892097Then you obviously live nowhere near me. I'm the only one within like a 10 mile radius who ever uses that expression.
2892102 Well, one of them is on youtube, and the others are practically my clones.
2892110Youtube doesn't count. And by clones, do you mean siblings?
2892128 No, they are not related to me in any way, they just act and look just like me.
2892129Ah, shadowers. I've had that before. Weird group of girls they were.
2892186 No, GUYS, it honestly scares me a bit.
2892199Wait. Like, how old? 'Cause if you say anywhere from 14+ then that's just weird.
2892212 16, I don't get it either.
2892222...Gay maybe? I honestly don't see any reason why a bunch of sophomores would be shadowing another guy.
2892277 Possible, I think that its very possible
Wait a sec, Red didn't use Mew in his battle against Gold. How did he have it when he got warped? Is he just carrying all his filled pokeballs in his bag?
2892634 Yep, that's what he does.
Red talks in this story. . Something I always wanted to happen in a story, minus the manga.
2892646 Well, if anyone in the Pokemon world was gonna figure out that the PC storage system was completely superfluous, it would be Red I guess.
Dude it needs to be way longer and the lack of description is making it incredibly bland. You are making some critical mistakes. One never have the two species just meet and in seconds be friends. Two Red is coming across as a Lego brick no emotion no, nothing. There has to be explanation but still it does have potential
It took you 2 hours and 40 minutes to type up about a page on MS word? I was that bad when I was five. Also, read a bit of the manga to try and get a feel for Red's personality.