Looks pretty good, will be keeping an eye on this.
Also, I bet those 4 downvotes are from the second person hate squad, there is a fair number of people on FIMFiction who do not appreciate the second person perspective, and would not hesitate to immediately downvote a second person story without reading it. At least that's my theory, I could be wrong.
I am far too lazy to do that. How dare you suggest otherwise.
Looks pretty good, will be keeping an eye on this.
Also, I bet those 4 downvotes are from the second person hate squad, there is a fair number of people on FIMFiction who do not appreciate the second person perspective, and would not hesitate to immediately downvote a second person story without reading it. At least that's my theory, I could be wrong.
It feels like I am in the story. Awesome!
Like it, *keeps reading*