One thing: Why are there no comments? This is a brilliant story and I really can't fathom why it has received so little attention.

Your writing is amazing, the idea is clever, and the overall execution is just spectacular. Well done, I really hope more people read this.

>>247372247372

My guess is because I've listed the EqD post with it. I originally wrote this story back in June and July.

>>247384247384

Yup, that makes sense. I'm surprised it wasn't featured though...was it? Otherwise more people would have seen it, surely.

>>247525247525

Not that I know of quite yet. I'd love for it to be featured. I still have to upload my other stories, though.

Very good, very interesting. Well done.

This is official history to me.

Heavy likes dis new story. Time to read MOAR!

So..much...

>>405219405219

I plan to rewrite it after I redo What Could Have Been. So much more I wanted to add in but couldn't. Plus, a bunch of small retcons that help explain things better. For example, the war actually happened over a series of months, not a single week. It gives me more time to fit in what I couldn't.

... Simply amazing.

>>749268749268

Thanks!

This story is one of my favorites, even after reading hundreds of others. Magnificent

What I'm wondering is what it's like on the Plane of Ascension.  Do they still have full conscious awareness?  Is it like Adam and Eve and their 'ignorant happiness'?  Can they still see the material plane?  Or is their plane material as well?

>>13376231337623

Deep Dark was meant to go more into the Alicorn Plane, but I have set that story aside, perhaps permanently.

This was a really really good fic. Definitely the best I have read which details Luna's descent into Nightmare Moon. I really cannot fathom why this fic has not received more attention because it is definitely worthy of it.

Well done, sir

I cried. That is beautiful.

This is REALLY good, I love how you write! it shows good pacin, thought and most of all an over all good and possible story, it's like that this is what did happen, not like "mayyybe but I dunno" more like "this IS what happened"

AGH MY HEART   it's good but AGH  Must.keep.READING

>>24069712406971

There's a future rewrite for it in store, fixing several of its issues. No idea if I'll ever get around to it.