So it's m/m featuring Twilight's dad and what appears to be AJ's Uncle Orange(assuming of course the cover pic are the characters in question). Interesting, will comment again after read.
And 57 (make that 58 ) think it's great. Seriously though, both of your stories are great. Considering most of the clop I see is badly written, it's nice to see an author who writes it well for a change.
8853521 This country does a lot of weird things, but I will fight to the death for the metric system. Everything being multiples of 10 instead of arbitrary increments is BETTER and MORE PRECISE, and FUCK everyone who prefers their shitty imperial system.
Perfect Dark is BEST game to lead into this story.
So it's m/m featuring Twilight's dad and what appears to be AJ's Uncle Orange(assuming of course the cover pic are the characters in question). Interesting, will comment again after read.
2930460 perfect dark is in this story? well fuck i guess it's a must read then.....
Needs a sequel, or at least conclusion for the last scene.
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I was originally going to make this a two-parter with the next part being a radical bisexual threesome between Night, Twilight, and Mosely.
But I decided to cut it short into a oneshot because I'm so mediocre at writing sex.
Perfect Dark, jokes about how stupid the N64's controller is, and a hilarious ending?! Good job!
2931376 You call that mediocre? I want that threesome so bad now!
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I'd say that at least 7 people think it's mediocre.
2931770 Well don't listen to them! This rocks! And so does your other story!
2931376 Believe me, your not a mediocre at writing, this is some of the best porn I've read in a good long while.
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You're cutting this incredible story short because 7 assholes don't like it?
Aww, come on...
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No, I decided to cut the story short because I wasn't confident in my writing abilities.
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Well, that's a damn shame. I absolutely loved this, just like I loved A New Day. Your lack of confidence is a bit... disheartening.
But it's all right, Shameless. In fact, I think I actually prefer this ending.
Cheers!
But I wanna see how he convinces her to forgive his infidelity. And then the make-up sex.
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I think I just might add the extended ending after all.
That was a buttload of yum. Too bad it's ending there.
Oh wow, such a sweet and hot bromance, I need one of those, too. Only the deepest of friendships could go this far
Well written, sir. Most enjoyable
Also, Oooooh, caught!
Intriguing, I haven't read good M/M since devices last story.
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And 57 (make that 58 ) think it's great. Seriously though, both of your stories are great. Considering most of the clop I see is badly written, it's nice to see an author who writes it well for a change.
NEEDS an ending with Twilight's reaction!!
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I haven't, actually.
Though I have seen the one where they play Perfect Dark, this isn't meant to reference any of that.
My God this is so good! Needed a bit more ball fondling, but overall a damn good story.
Is it wrong that i felt like t the belly run was the hottest part?
"Perfect Dark? Yup, got it right here!"
I f**king love you!
That, was the absolute shit.
Noice!
That is basically how us Americans Act
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This country does a lot of weird things, but I will fight to the death for the metric system. Everything being multiples of 10 instead of arbitrary increments is BETTER and MORE PRECISE, and FUCK everyone who prefers their shitty imperial system.