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Just a heads up for anyone who begins reading this story. It is part of a trilogy, this one in particular being the third one. That being said, the reason for why I am posting only the third one on here, is that the first one has very little to do with MLP, with a small pony reference towards the end. The second one went into more detail about what that reference meant. It detailed a small meeting with Pinkamena and other members of a organization known as Foundation 177. Aside from this meeting, that story also had little to do with the MLP universe. If you wish to check out those two stories, then they can be found on my Fanfiction.net account. http://www.fanfiction.net/~rangikufan999
I assure you however, you won't be missing anything major if you choose to start reading this one first. :)
*ear twitches* I like it has gore
I can tell this is bad and you have no idea what you're talking about from the description alone.
No. Just no.
2914755 Can you give me some better feedback then? If anything seems bad, let me know how I can improve on it. Negativity will only deprecate the premise of writing, so can I ask you to be more constructive with your criticism, provide something better in place of that which you have mentioned to be bad.
2914844 My criticism cannot be constructive, as I did not intend for it to be such. In fact, it shouldn't even be called criticism as I just took a look at the description, saw that gaping error and was promptly turned away from it. But, if you feel like I should explain myself, then I shall try.
Since the main characteristic of a psychopath is being unable to feel emotions at all, it is impossible for one to be a psychopath and be depressed. Such elementary error can only mean that you're trying to build an entertaining plot around a character with a psychopathology of which you know virtually nothing about--sans what you may have heard here or there or read from unreliable sources--meaning that no matter how the story is written, it has a basic flaw that makes it all completely unbelievable (more than talking, magical, friendshipmancer ponies, and that is saying a lot).
Is this enough?
2915138 Thank you for your thoughts, I will adapt to this new piece of information as needed. Though I have two concerns; One: Psychopaths often are linked to major depression, and can in fact feel depression though its not the same way normal people feel it. The feelings they won't feel are empathy or remorse. Not only that, but there are other emotions that a psychopath can feel. For example, Glee, anger, frustration, consternation, boredom, histrionic flashes, infatuation, self-love to a degree, and contempt. You are not entirely incorrect with your statement, some emotions just don't exist in some psychopaths, but to say they don't feel emotions at all is incorrect. Two: I feel a swirling vortex of anger within your post, much like the various thought posts you have put up on the site. For constructive criticism, might I suggest holding back on that interlaced anger? It won't provide the artist you are critiquing to feel like you are just bashing them instead of trying to help them. Again, I really appreciate the time you took to respond to me, Thanks for the advice. I will do some more research on what a Psychopath is though, since you brought it up. Also, the description is merely a description. Covers shouldn't judge an entire story, but sense it seems to be an issue, I shall edit it. ;)
~rangikufan999
2916087 But I'm not aiming at constructive criticism. I'm not aiming at criticism at all.
These are comments.
2916523 Despite that, you actually took the time to respond, and invoked some new thoughts within me. That is why I am thanking you. :)
2918976 No problem, then.