Okay, so despite a couple of erros(Which you said Phantom hasn't sent you the edit fair enough) this is a really good chapter. It's good to see a small brake from the serious stuff with Frost and Rainbow Dash there so as always keep it up.
Rainbow kissed him? I thought she was a lesbian. Black stallion,rude....me possibly? Maybe,like where this is going thought. Tracked,Thumbs Up and all that.
Here you go!
305658 The fires of hell hath no fury like mine....
There wasn't much furnishings in the small house. I just want to point out it should be There weren't many furnishings in the small house.
The cieling was cracked and looked very unstable The ceiling
305667 STFU
Phantom didn't send me the edits... Hes an ass
305669 Dude calm down I'm just point them out.....also it's you're awake not your awake.
And Frost is back.
Okay, so despite a couple of erros(Which you said Phantom hasn't sent you the edit fair enough) this is a really good chapter. It's good to see a small brake from the serious stuff with Frost and Rainbow Dash there so as always keep it up.
305686 Y U NO THUMB UP THEN?
305688 Because I've seen really good stories turn into crapfests so I don't want to have to thumb this down if that happens.
Y U TAKE SO LONG TO FINALLY UPLOAD!?
Also, I'm liking Summer Dawn's attitude, you've captured it well
I give this story, currently, 3 Yay's!
305690 Have I let you down yet?
305711 Nope.
305712 Point proven...
305713 Still no thubuming it up until later though.
305788 Y U NO READ PREQUELS?
305788 Dude, unlike the other two I won't rage. It's better if you read the other but it still makes sense without reading them.
306119 Eventually yes...
306132 Oh, by the way do you want any help with the proofreading?
306139 Nope I'm good now! Thanks for the offer!
Rainbow kissed him? I thought she was a lesbian.
Black stallion,rude....me possibly?
Maybe,like where this is going thought. Tracked,Thumbs Up and all that.