When Cinny published her first book, she hadn't expected it to be so popular or to find herself in the position of being herdmother to one of the ponies she wrote about. There are some sins a colourful hat just can't cover.
Uhm, okay ... there's a few issues I can see. You might want to get an editor, they'd be able to help more then me. But where I stopped was
it’d be wait more safer
Wait more safer? WAY more safer. I'll give it a look when I get home but, yeah, I suggest poking at someone with some editing time on their hands to look this over more thoroughly than I can.
Uhm, okay ... there's a few issues I can see. You might want to get an editor, they'd be able to help more then me. But where I stopped was
Wait more safer? WAY more safer. I'll give it a look when I get home but, yeah, I suggest poking at someone with some editing time on their hands to look this over more thoroughly than I can.