Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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Heh one of my favorite mash characters a Walter"Radar"O'Reilly
Yes, that was definitely a MASH reference featuring Radar. Hope to see more of Sonar in future chapters.
It's hard to take him seriously now. Like what does this 18 year old possibly know about politics? This kid is just sitting in a suit in some office granted to him by a 1000+ year old being and he acts like he knows what he's doing. I feel embarrassed for him.
5735943 I thought of Jonas Quinn, but that is probably because I'm a huge Stargate fan.
5735978 I feel embarrassed for you, thinking that an 18 year old can't know more about politics than an adult.
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He hasn't had any education since he was 16. I don't know what high school you went to, but sophomores at my highschool, as much as they'd have liked to believe otherwise, did not have the knowledge or grasp of politics that legitimate politicians have. Anyone can listen to the media and have a basic understanding of current events, but that comprehension doesn't equate to being able to politic like people who have decades of experience in this field(Let alone the 1000+ years that the Princesses have).
Not only that, but his 2 year isolation from society and having to focus on survival 24/7 is also a detriment to any knowledge he had on politics. What, you think he's been studying political maneuverings in-between zombie battles? Give me a break! The fact is that this is unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, I'm still going to keep reading this story; this isn't a deal breaker to me. I like the story. I'll just have to stretch my boundaries and take it at face value that somehow Dominic knows how to politic.
5736073 Many people self study about their interests, a 16 year old in a first world country could easily have dedicated a lot of his free time to study whatever he wanted.
His lack of an official education would matter little if he already knew more than those who had the education.
Another well done chapter dude, nice job! :D
Fire.... that is all.
That's some Crimea shit right there.
Hello Radar. So does Sonar keep a bunch of animals?
The story's great, however the chapters seem a bit short.
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No kidding. Teenagers know jack shit in general, period. The idea that you had any clue about much of anything (nevermind something as complex as geopolitics and running a country) at that age is one of those things you look back on 15 years later and only wonder how you ever managed to be that stupid and full of yourself.
good job keep it up
I can't exactly fully blame Dom for his thinking. Since anyone would be thinking it would be a bit too convenient for a pal of yours with a ready number of soldiers, generals, and a means to get there with a plan, there would be many red alarms flinging to ones head.
the New United States of America, will need to acquire some territories as well. Earn the love of it's people, and all that hearts and minds bullshit.
Other than that, I loved the chapter, although shorter than I expected. Luna done fucked up, and must now deal with the consequences.
5736585 over 200 different nationalities and many with completely different cultures. As I said it can't be the same.
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Never fear my dear friends! There are going to be plenty of 'Bay of Pigs' moments down the road. Dominic is a novice at this, basing his political moves off of movies and history.
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What? I never said I knew anything at that age. I was talking about sophomores in a past tense because I already graduated from high school; it's especially reprehensible that you think I was (somehow) boasting my own ability to politic when in the same paragraph I was praising those who've had decades of experience. You should learn to read because I honestly feel insulted for being bashed for something I never said.
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Impersonal you, not 'you' you.
Ah so someone has watched MASH, good show, i am actually re-watching and up to season 9 again. I saw the reference as soon as the line was said
Nice foreshadowing with the card.
5739541 pedals seem much more reasonable then a whole flower. I'm assuming the taste would be bitter.
Alrighty, we have...
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Now I want to see who in his 'army' is...
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heh i bet dom is republican
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Is Sonar based on Radar from MASH? If so, then God help that aid, the whole country will be run by her.
Very good chapter, I can't wait to see where the U.S. settles.
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Really? Where?
Sonar is it then? We can then hope Dom is more a Sherman Potter the a Henery Blake for the sake of our fledgling colony of New America. A nice place on the coast between Equesria and the Gryphon landa would do well. Perhaps our symbol of the Eagle will endear our people in the eyes of the Gryphons.
So we have a Henry Blake or a Sherman Potter, a Walter Radar, now all we need is a Clinger.
Down Periscope? The crew of the stingray had a sonarman nicknamed Sonar (Sonarman 2nd Class E.T. "Sonar" Lovacelli)
Alright perhaps something is needed to be mentioned here if it isn't. Considering this is a total stealth mission by the looks of the first few paragraphs. Having them speak would be out of the question, due to the proximity to enemy units they would be using STRICTLY hand.. or I suppose in this case, hoof signals to minimize their chances of being heard. You'd be surprised how well someone can hear even a hushed whisper. If I were you.. I'd figure a way to re-write this particular part of their sneaky beakyness.
Those neuralyzers are quite extreme!
God damn man. That reference was amazing. *Waves the 'go you' flag*
5740284 yea, he kinda needs to get the sand out of his vagina.
I want you to send Dominic into the island alone
MGS3 style
The drama with Luna, at the end was a bit HARSH, but necessary. I can't wait for Celestias' reaction.
Bet ya this Sonar character is based off of Radar from M*A*S*H
Captain Haratio Hornblower...N'uff said !!!
A late comment: Dom said, "Luna, you're the strongest "woman" I know. HUH !!!