The Greatest Failures
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I am so sorry for the long updates!
They should never take that long!
I have no ideas what's going on... A little clarification would be helpful...
3080222 I must have seriously fucked up.... okay what doesnt make sense? please tell me so i may fix it.
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It went from exposition to why you have portals to pony infiltrators with super armor who are Seal Team 6 grade material to some scientist human that is not mentioned before hand that seems to have power over even Queen Celestia (what happened to Luna), to on of the super ponies running away for some unexplained reason.