Is there any way that you could possibly make the chapters longer? These short fillers won't sate your readers for long periods of time, as they will go off and find other stories that engage them more. Just a suggestion, take it or leave it, it is interesting to get a glimpse of what's happening back a the capitol.
well it certainly wasn't the negotiation i was hoping for, but at least i know what happened during our visitor's little mishap with the guards. though you may want to speed things up just a little bit. keep it up, hope to see more soon.
We want more and longer chapters but all we get is FUCKING EXCUSES! Heh, just joking there but I was exited to see a new chapter but was left unsated, not being rude of course. Can't wait until the next chapter.
2904426 no, I have a better Idea... *Phone noises* ...Heeeeyyy! Hows my favorite crazy pirate Uncle? yes, yes, I do know the definition of insanity, of course you can tell me! Its me, I wont judge! hey, Im sending you the info on your next victim kay? You dont have to be too, nice with him, but. leave him alive okay? Thanks Uncle Vaas! :3
I have pretty much one word for a chapter without the Predator:
FIIIIILLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEER!
Is there any way that you could possibly make the chapters longer? These short fillers won't sate your readers for long periods of time, as they will go off and find other stories that engage them more. Just a suggestion, take it or leave it, it is interesting to get a glimpse of what's happening back a the capitol.
please make him kill these two
well it certainly wasn't the negotiation i was hoping for, but at least i know what happened during our visitor's little mishap with the guards. though you may want to speed things up just a little bit.
keep it up, hope to see more soon.
Ace out
We want more and longer chapters but all we get is FUCKING EXCUSES! Heh, just joking there but I was exited to see a new chapter but was left unsated, not being rude of course.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
razorback wants supplies, I say supply his face with shoulder beam
2904426 no, I have a better Idea... *Phone noises* ...Heeeeyyy! Hows my favorite crazy pirate Uncle? yes, yes, I do know the definition of insanity, of course you can tell me! Its me, I wont judge! hey, Im sending you the info on your next victim kay? You dont have to be too, nice with him, but. leave him alive okay? Thanks Uncle Vaas! :3
What is this "I'am" thing I keep seeing? You're probably confusing the word 'I'm' and 'I am'.
Ok now I want that Griffin Prince dead.