Equestria is teetering on the brink of war. Twilight Sparkle is sent in to try and salvage the situation. Along the way she meets an old friend, and together they try and save what they had as the world around them burns.
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And here we have some complexity in the villains at last. This makes things much more interesting. I very much like how you illustrate the Khan opinion of Equestria and its princesses. It's a great idea to make them more than powerful heads of state, but to also conflate them with mythological fiends, which both suits the Khans' religiosity and also reinforces just how far above the princesses are compared to everyone else. The multiple Khan factions make this story more interesting by making things no longer simple as good guys here and bad guys there. This story is unfolding excellently.