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Edit: I kept track of all the errors I noticed this time.
1. override instead of over ride
2. Happy hunting Doctor Cane, instead of Hunting.
hope i didn't miss any, still don't trust the floofy monstars.
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You can blame at least one of those on Alamut
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I like finding things
Should I notice the punctuation things?
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Yeah, yeah it's always the psychopath's fault
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I don't remember saying my sister made any of those mistakes.
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Aren't you afraid of being strangled or something
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Nah, she still lives with our parents and she's too lazy to come ALL THE WAY to my house just to kill me
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I'll leave you 2 to it *turns down lights, puts on Barry White*
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You people are crazy
Well I have to say, you have my full and undivided attention now.
Who am I kidding, this entire "book" including the first "book" was actually amazing :)
I am really quite excited to continue through the story and look forward to your updates.
Question though, what exactly did happen to the human Venture? I think from memory you gave a brief explanation that strongly pointed to him being linked to the American Wastelands.. Which I'm assuming is the human version if the Wasteland.
Also, seriously, the Bushwoolies, sweet celestia that takes me back haha.
Please keep the content coming and I'm sorry If you have already answered my above question beforehand.
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I think I missed a point but this this the THIRD story in the series. The second is called Brother From Another Mother.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/77567/foe-war-never-changes-brother-from-another-mother
Go read that one it should answer all your questions :P
Poor other comment :'(
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You posted spoilers! I was just trying to keep from ruining book two for Horacio
I knows and ams sorry :(
On the plus side I'm no longer nightmaring the carpet monsters :)
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I'm sure we can fix that.
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Cheers for that I will get right on to reading it ^_^
Anyone know when the next chapters up for this btw, kinda run out of actually good FoE spin offs to read and still waiting on Horizons..
Love my TL;DR classified fics, the best thing to happen in my reading life since, well, The Lex Rider Series...
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I dunno. The author is kind of a flake, so you might not see any updates right away, but we can always hope he gets off his lazy butt and gets back to work in a timely fashion.
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Aww I'm quite certain that the author has probably been busying himself with other things in life, and that said author will get back to us as soon as said author has the chance :3
Honestly but :D
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Aha, but now I remember kuriboh so I play multiply and win the game.
Ohhhhhh godddddd. It's getting more and more intense. I'm so glad that you stepped up the seriousness at the end of book 2. It's worked so well for you so far. The fact that you can make me feel hate for a character: Scourge Cloud. Is so good. it gets me really immersed and i love it.
Not so many mistakes~! although i might i have forgotten them due to moving places while reading but other then that it is ok.