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I DONT EVEN NEED TO READ IT TO GET SHIVERS IN MAH BACK.
Stop writing these. Seriously. Do you know what happens to authors who write these fics? They are never taken seriously.
there is enough freaking "cupcakes" ripoffs stop dragging the story from the dead. it was a mediocre gore fic at best nothing more people.
when its all said an done cupcakes is nothing more than a shock fic so that the author could get attention
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Well... That's a bit disturbing. I only say a bit because I'm kinda desensitized to a lot of stuff on the net. Good story though, very scary. 5 freaked out ponies out of 5
... At least that's what I would say if this where original. I'm not even going to rate this. If you wana make a Creepy Pasta, go to the website for it.
I HATE creepypastas, but this was quite interesting.
I don't get why a lot people hate this kind of fanfics...
seriously, bronies want love and tolerance with everyone no?
why not we start tolerating this kind of fics?
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Because they're horribly written and completely lack substance?
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don't get me wrong I have nothing against dark fanfics, I'm just really freaking tired of cupcakes being dragged around constantly
it just gets old after awhile, especially if its badly written because then its some literature challenged person trying to be scary and failing horribly at it
219253 and what is you comprension of substance?
219257 well let me tell you that you're right, I'm tired of cupcakes too, but that doesn't mean that I hate gorefics, but seriously cupcakes is so overrated
bravo! i love creapypasta stories. Squidwards suicide being my 1st lol. this was well done. a good writer can put its reader in that situation, i have found myself up at that time watching the hub (because i like the older sitcoms, and TF and gi joe come on at 5am) and it would scare the holy hell out of me if this happened to me. and i can sure put myself in that situation
btw i gave you 5 stars...haters gonna hate, but at least it brought you to almost 2 stars...
if you enjoyed this, please rate it up, as assfaced morons keep rating it .5
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Plot, character development, exposition. Things that Cupcakes ripoffs sorely lack, and in doing so give grimdark a bad name.
219292 well you're right saying that cupcakes lacks all that, but in my opinion of ''substance'' I would add the matter that the fic keeps you reading it.
maybe cupcakes lacks of plot, ect, and have a bad name because someone couldn't get better ideas.
but seriously a gorefic can have a plot, character development, exposition and a good name. Is just matter of how good the writer is writing gorefics but unfortunately we have to wait; to see if that happens.
"Nothing is True, Everything is Permitted." - Ezio from ACII reviewers.
Add Comedy, add a little bit of humor into the narrator's words and it would be a fun fic to read.
Hackers FTW!
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...why would a gore fic have comedy?
221248 Why not? It will be funny.
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thats the problem, its not funny.
222677 Depends on the way the guy reacted, if he took the whole Cupcake thing as a joke and even parodies it, it has potential.
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well then its not grimdark, its just morphs into comedy
222847 I know how I can make grim-dark into comedy without Pinkie's sarcastic comments.
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Then by all means, go ahead and do it. That actually might be an original , creative, idea.
dear author
thank you for making me read that and making me throw up my dinner i will now procede to murder you so watch out while your sleeping cuz im coming for YOU
Freak that's what would happen to me!
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You are such a PUSSY, Cupcakes is not that bad, seriously do you all make something out of nothing, its not even that bad, but if you need something as somewhat of an antidote go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_AbtCTbSWTk. It is funny as all hell. And to end off the only creepy thing about Cupcakes is some of the pictures and some videos. And GORE IS GOOD, just look at MK.
357480Bitch you crazy.
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Hey I love violence, most American's (and quite a few Canadian's, Hockey anyone) do. Violence is part of everyday life, and if you want to read something that I love to hate read Sweat Apple Massacre and Trixie's Fun House. Why do these suck to me because they combine Violence (good) with rape (terrible). This is not saying I promote or think violence (Domestic and Terrorist acts) are ok. I also say that I am not by any means desensitized to violence.
Also this guy is awesome and is right Review 300: Cupcakes Fanfic (MLP), type it in on youtube. And I have a non-brony reviewing the show, Season 1- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CjM6t4DmUPE and Season 2- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACi5yg9YJrw&feature=channel. I say the Show is good, Lauren Faust and Tara Strong are the best, but unless they say a video game by name or have a video game character in a Cameo I will not become a Brony. Or the voice actors sing the Great Mighty Poo.
I read this on four (now five) different sites, all of them written differently. Which one is the real one?
*confused dash
......This was not scary. BEN was scary. The original Cupcakes was scary. Jeff the killer was scary. THIS....was just boring. I am only telling my opinion.
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And neither are you, judging by your profile picture.
review 8/10
Its really well done really good. It should be on creepy pasta wiki!
If you didn't put THE END It would make the story ending more scary and batter
You get a like and comment but not a fav.
So I hope my review bold's well for your story
comment back if you feel like it
Anyway really good but not good for a fav
It was a little boring for me but it was writen well
but i do LOVE
Pinkamina
the scary pinkie
not the poofy haired one... but the MURDER
I love this
This is twisted
Love it.
I love this story, but everytime I think about it, I think of this video.
How 'bout you?
I'LL READ THE REST LATER..
THIS IS..
DISGUSTING!!
I've seen Cupcakes...
BUT THIS SOUNDS SO MUCH WORSE THAN THE ONE I SAW!!
creepy
Still good tho
I decided to have a look at this fan fic because it was listed as similar to a fic I wrote, called "Hey, Batter! Volume 1: Failure." And, they are both similar in that they're both based on Sergent Sprinkles' story. My compliments, as much to Vornado as to FimFiction for finding a fic that is indeed very similar to mine. Good job.
Oh boy ya gonna DIE
Bill pony: Was this a real curse episode [Real] or is this another Fan-made Grimdark video [Fake].
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I was always confused by how the heck Rainbow was still alive yet also went through all of the Cupcakes events.