Eh, it was better than most random fics.

I... I will approve...

...Nah.

Loved it :)

That was strange. I enjoyed it.

We need more watersports and beasties!

Yours truly... NecromancerX69

Ps. I am watching you...
Ps2. Please for the love of all that is evil... never make scat fics.

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Glad you enjoyed it! And uh... Thanks for the watch? I don't do scat, just good ol water sports.

I'm thinking I'll do a fic like this and Special Cream Pie for each of the mane six. Maybe do Scootadash next. Anyone got a suggestion for AJ besides Big Mac? I was thinking Braeburn.

Quick and to the point. Just like my ex... Am I right... thumbs up!

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Small world.

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AJ x Bra... Me gusta

Another good idea would be AppleJack with Shinning Armor, also Twilight with BigMac, and for the grand finale... foursome with AJxSAxTxBM.
Sharing bros is magic.

Well, still better then anything I could write.

It...was about my Flutters, so...ummm...

But then I read it and...

So, yeah...I enjoyed it. Not usually my clop of tea, but...have a like!

Huh.........this is......new.......hmmmmm.......Not bad, really, think you need to separate the two different voices talking as she does with her mind but other then that....honestly not bad, maybe you could add Angel bucking Fluttershy next? I'm in

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Thanks for the fav, in MsWord I had her "demon" voice in italic... It seems that didn't carry over via copy/paste.

I left it incomplete because I want to revisit this story again and add other critters to her buck list and show some more of her favorite fetishes.

For now, though, I'm brainstorming ideas for the rest of the mane six. Got some really good ideas for Pinkiemac and Twixie I can't wait to share!

Wha? The cover Image I think I saw it before, it was on the "Spike at your service" episode...

Crazy...

Loved this story but I want more chapters added to it please :)

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Ask and you shall receive

I liked it! I wanna see this continued

Considering lots of animals pee and poop wherever they want, I'd expect Fluttershy to develop the watersports fetish in another direction too — cleaning up after animals with her pretty mouth.