To all her subjects, Princess Celestia is a kind, loving, and caring ruler. However, Princess Celestia has a dark secret....one that even her sister, Princess Luna, and her student, Princess Twilight Sparkle don't know. The statues in Canterlot Gardens could tell you that. A secret that could force her to give up the throne and face punishment.
IF YOU DO NOT LIKE EVIL CELESTIA DO NOT READ!!
Cover art by me
*Princess Twilight Sparkle will come later in the story*
Note: This story is not related to the story 'Statue Garden' by NodoubtbuodoN. This is something completely different.
Chapters (4)
S...h.....w......h....WHAT THE BUCK IS GOING ON?!
I'm not sure whether you're trying to achieve trollestia or just a mad pony. The statues all being ponies has been explored many times before but i don't see many fanfics about it. Keep it up and don't disappoint or princess Celesta will turn you into a statue.
Have a dislike, on the house!
So another brony is willing to believe the tainted words of Discord... you have my vote down, this concept has been done to death and does not fit her character.
2680231 Oh, oh my.
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Hi. I'm miss horrible speling and grammer. It's nice to meet you! I saw you posted this story in Quick Help so I though I might go and help out.
I can promise anything anything super helpful only some little things I noticed.
First, yes this idea is done a lot but I think with how your doing it it does have a spin. So that's ok?
These are the parts I found confusing that you might want to fix up a little.
That sentence just doesn't sound right.
I don't know what do with it but fixing it will help out your story's idea in how your describing it in the beginning.
The should be They.
Luna is a little repetitive there. It could say something like... , the dark alicorn, Luna and got a *adjective* smile. Or something, that should be one sentence not two.
That's all I got. And your welcome if it helped if it didn't well there you go some useless info.
Also. If you think what I said about this chapter was helpful at all I could look over the second chapter too.
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OMG Thanks so much. It's really nice to have an someone point out errors...I'll fix them as soon as I can.
CELLY WHT MUSIC YOU KEEP SECRETS FROM US!!!!!!!
CELLYYYYYYYYYYYYY! WTF I KNEW THAT YOU DID IT!!!!!!!
Friggin celestia
what a stone cold bitch
2684995 a proof reader works as well
:D
also. never read anything with evil celly. i will give this a go :D
ok yeah this was interesting...but i can see what you meant :l
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Nah, they're just hurt that their favorite villain got what he deserved and are making up stuff to try and explain why. Evil Celestia is the only solution.
3155777 I don't believe it you are the biggest fags I think I have ever met. you are going to down vote this because Celestia is oc its a fucking fanfic she could be a purple human and as long as the story is good still be a good fic. Grow the fuck up and stop treating it like its cannon.There are bad oc fics and there are some great oc fics.
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I had completely forgotten I had made this comment. I wouldn't have commented like that if it wasn't so. Prevalent. Among. These. Fics.
It's like people immediately assumed the worse because Discord got what was coming to him.
3614588 Fair enough I reacted too aggressively and I apologise I am glad that you were mature enough to over look my harsh statement. I merely think that seeing Celestia as the villain is an interesting approach whilst she is depicted as evil in many fics this is one of the few that show why she is evil. The taste of power of turning people to stone. It is an interesting if short chaptered fic and I wish to see how it goes. Sorry again