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more, MORE, MMMOOOOAAAARRRR!!!!!!!
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Hot damn. I have to say, what i'm seeing here is quality comedy and storytelling, a very rare sight on fimfiction, especially in the "Human In Equestria" genre. You're absolutely spot-on when it comes to Harold and Kumar's character and behavior; the ribbing between the two is good enough to rival (and at times, surpass) what you see in the movies.
Grammar, punctuation and story layout are practically flawless. Other than the occasional "hmm, maybe this sentence could be written a bit better" (but mind you, that's just my subjective opinion) this here is an excellent story.
Keep going. I can't wait to see what happens when these two clowns come in contact with Equestria's populace.
2675179 Thank you, you've absolutely made my day!
2675179 I agree with Reaper. This is masterfully written, with enough of the same brand of comedy I expected from the duo that it feels legitimate. I could see them trying to spread "Happy Leaf" all across Equestria, funding themselves with the "worthless" gems that litter the area. If you put this on hiatus, I'm almost tempted to do this idea myself, it's brilliant!
2678095 Pretty sure I want to write this one myself, thanks though if I find a portal to Equestria myself and you don't see any activity for a few months you can have dibs.
WELL, that was a good chapter.
Despite this being a Harold and Kumar crossover, you've captured the dynamic duo as they are portrayed perfectly. Not only did you make this seem like another installment in their trilogy, this is well-written and is fun to read.
One thing I wonder, if this follows the nature of Harold and Kumar like the way we all know, then will we be expedting a certain appearance to be made in Equestria?
Neil Patrick Harris!
2681253 Yes of course.
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Probably in about two chapters. Shh. I want it to be a surprise.
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I see sex, drugs, parties, shenanigens, and possible orgies in the near future now. And I like-y a lot.
Oh please oh please put nph in this please
I see that rain growing those seeds. I'm calling it now. And it's going to be glorious.
One paragraph in and my sides are already dying XD