This story is moving way too fast. I suggest combining your chapters into at least 2 because by chapter 4 we should already be starting on the meat of the story; this still feels like prologue material.

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Thanks for the heads up.

"Feather Touch will be your servant here at the castle, so Miss Touch?" Celestia calls to a white unicorn. The unicorn walks over to Celestia.

"Follow me sir."

"My name is Feather Touch. I am your servant here at the palace."

This pony really reminds me of Feather Touch from Machinations of a Trickster.

And she's my favorite character!