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Herculean


The spanish version of Frosted Flakes is called Zucaritas and Tony the Tiger looks freaking intense on the box.

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There is no doubt that Octavia loves Vinyl just as well as anypony ever could.

:facehoof:

Outside of that, however. This looks great.

What's your angle here, Herculean? Where are you planning on taking us?

2803269 I'm sorry I ever doubted you.

Also: Dis gon b gud.

Octavia couldn't help but laugh aloud at Vinyl's last warning.

"Please, why would I freak out?"

Octavia could not have known the answer to that question.

That's ominous. :twilightoops:

The insight into Tavi's thought pattern in this chapter was rather intriguing.

Thank you for reminding me I have to catch up on the other story.

It is at that moment that Octavia realizes that if she walked in to find a burglar, her first thought would be the intruder was a friend of Vinyl's.

I laughed to hard at this line!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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So far, it looks to be platonic love. There is a Romance tag, of course, so maybe that'll change. :derpytongue2:

Great job so far! Awesome cliffhanger to end on as well...can't wait to see what happens next.

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Eeh, platonic or not, the entire 'Vinyl and Octavia are related, best friends, rivals or banging' thing has kinda been done to death. It's just kinda a minor turn-off when I see it in stories, I do actually like this however.

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Fair enough. It's definitely been done a lot. I don't mind it, as long as it's done right. :moustache:

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I don't mind it if it's done right, but it's been done too much to really be something I'd click on just because of that. Now, if we got something like, Tavi+Twilight ship, that would be interesting to check out. :moustache:

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Ooh, never seen that one before! Agreed, that would be interesting. :moustache:

dis some good shit

YOU'RE BACK! ALSO, SHIT'S GOING DOWN! Can't wait to see where this particular clusterfuck leads.

"I prefer to release more pleasurable fluids, frankly."

Blood can be pleasurable...

Where did you get the passage that you used for your cover art? My google-fu has failed me, unless you came up with it yourself.

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It isn't from anywhere, but I didn't write it either. A friend of mine makes these.

Cadance isn't going to like this. Ever since Chrysalis, she doesn't take well to other girls touching her toys.

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Sure she was upset, but all she managed to do in protest was get captured, freed by Twilight, captured again, and then freed by Twilight again. She basically stopped Chrysalis by accident after that. In other words, there is no feasible reason to be afraid of Cadence other than she can be thrown like a javelin.

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Maybe, maybe. Still, she won't like it; I'm certain she'd rather take her ball and go home. Unfortunately, said ball (and its twin) is still attached to the rest of Shining Armor...

Oh, come on! You can't just—

Fine. We'll wait for the details. Wait in agonising, taunting, excruciating uncertainty.

You take longer than it takes me to make a chapter...

Have I ever told you I love your writing? :pinkiehappy:

For some reason, she could easily see Vinyl masterminding the quick entrances and exits of many stallions through different openings.

A-B 6 days
B-C 1 day
C-D 97 days
D-E 58 days
E-F 50 days
F-G 13 days
G-H 44 days... and counting. :raritydespair:

Whenever I see that you published a new chapter, I get more excited than Princess Celestia finding a new excuse to send Luna to the Moon.

I seriously hate how this doesn't get enough attention. It's genius all the way.

Please update this more. I'm so curious for what's next.

There needs to be more stories like this. Day job and responsibilities aside, stories specifically like this one are needed in a greater frequency.

Herculean, you know what to do. Day job and responsibilities are only so important.

Is Shining still locked in that room? Are we going to get a nice scene soon. Because this story is just going everywhere.

Has Shining Armor done anything special earlier on in the series?

Nooo! They can't just kill off Shining Armor!

Octavia didn't get to have any fun with him yet! Neither did Vinyl, for that matter!

... At least not yet!

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