Problems.. occur? I saw no problems. And also... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS. ENDING THE STORY LIKE THAT? You know you gotta write a sequel with Luna and Celly now...
It wasn’t that big of a potion. tasted a bit icky though ” Oh boy, I think it’s happening Rainbow....” with no pony to help ” Whew! Thank goodness! Oh Celestia, its starting again "Oh Celestia,I don't want this Each time pinkie orgasmed was cut through the air again and swelled forcefully casing her to open her mouth wider and throat with milk, she fainted The look on Rainbow dash's face
1. Forgot to capitalise. 2. Extra spacing. 3. Nopony, one word. 4. Extra spacing. 5. It's. 6. Forgot your spacing. 7. Forgot to capitalise. 8. Forgot your full stop. 9. Causing. 10. Forgot your full stop. 11. Forgot to capitalise.
Boner.
What r u doing?
Stahp!
that was...... odd.... but fufilling
Problems.. occur? I saw no problems. And also... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS. ENDING THE STORY LIKE THAT? You know you gotta write a sequel with Luna and Celly now...
FUCK MOLESTIA IS BACK
2612229
SHE NEVER LEFT!
2612234 FUCK *cough cough* buck this *walk out of the room*
god this was hot! now we need celestia, luna, and twilight to use that potion!
please write a luna lactation(sequal hooks must be sated)
What did I just read and will there be a sequel?
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Hmmm.........
Yeah, I can clop to this.
usually, i can only clop to straight, but this is an amazing exception
Currently my favorite story on this sight. Great job,
This was Awesome!
Don't mind me, going at it again.
It wasn’t that big of a potion. tasted a bit icky though
” Oh boy, I think it’s happening Rainbow....”
with no pony to help
” Whew! Thank goodness!
Oh Celestia, its starting again
"Oh Celestia,I don't want this
Each time pinkie orgasmed was
cut through the air again
and swelled forcefully casing her to open her mouth wider
and throat with milk, she fainted
The look on Rainbow dash's face
1. Forgot to capitalise.
2. Extra spacing.
3. Nopony, one word.
4. Extra spacing.
5. It's.
6. Forgot your spacing.
7. Forgot to capitalise.
8. Forgot your full stop.
9. Causing.
10. Forgot your full stop.
11. Forgot to capitalise.