Fluttershy yawned as she slowly woke up, eyes covered in all different kinds of dust and strands of hay from the floor of the room. Don't these people know what a broom is?
Fluttershy let out another small yawn, and looked to the right to see a little dove, to see some kind of red...paint of sorts splattered over its feathers.
"Oh! Hey little guy!" Fluttershy said, as she rubbed the sleep out of her eyes with the wrists of her hooves. "What's your name?" She asked, with a little smile.
"Oooohhh...Fluttershy, quit messing with those animals for a second and...Go...Back...To..." Twilight was going to finish her sentence, but dozed straight back to sleep.
Fluttershy let out a small giggle, as she focused her attention back to the red and white bird, that only cooed in some kind of strange language. "Oh, my, I haven't heard that language before!" Fluttershy responded.
"Hey...Yellow wing horse, quit messin' with that bird...You dunno where it's been..." The Scout said, with a grumble as he covered his ears with his pillow.
Fluttershy let out a small blush, which beget another small giggle. She paid her attention back to the dove, which had began to nestle itself into Fluttershy's hair. "Awww, it must like me..." She said, as she let out a small yawn, and lied her head down, realizing she was a lot more tired than she thought she was.
Later that day, while everyone else was still asleep, Scout was beginning to get up, and hastily got out of bed and to his wardrobe. "Jeez, what time is it..." He asked nobody in particular, as he grabbed his normal shirt, pants and socks, throwing them lazily onto the bed to put on later. He stretched out a bit, as he began undressing himself of the dirty clothes he wore before, and putting them in a big pile of clothes that just clumped together on the bottom of the wardrobe.
After he closed the wardrobe, he got dressed...Pretty normal, right? After the Scout put on his clothes, he went over and kicked the yellow pony, which caused the dove to fly out of her hair, and begin attacking.
"Woah! Hey! Jeez! Would 'ya freaking...." The scout flailed about, trying to swat the bird away from his face as it continued its onslaught of defense for Fluttershy. After successfully battling the bird away from him, he was left breathing heavily, with peck bites covering a solid 95% of his face, but at least the bird flew away!
"Jeez, not even Archimedes bites me that hard..." He said, rubbing every mark on his face that pained him.
The Scout looked to Fluttershy, who stayed asleep through all that, nuzzling her head about her hooves to get them a bit more comfortable.
The Soldier walked in shortly after this chain of events, fully clothed with a book attached to his waist. "Private Scout! Put your frilly panties on and help us cap that intel!" He commanded, throwing the Scout his bag of weapons.
"Alright! I'll hurry up already! Just wait with th' gang and I'll be out in a jiffy!" Scout responded, placing the bag down and hurrying to his clothes to put them on.
"And Scout, I want you to write a story about how...Urgh....Excellent... You are and about your amazing story..." The Soldier said, as he held the book on his waist out to the Scout, who cautiously took it from him.
"Sooo...Just keep doin' what I've been doin'?" He asked for clarification.
"Yes! Now shut up and put your clothes on! Those Blu bastards won't stand a chance with the plan we've cooked up for 'em! It's like we were cooking up a grenade, and it's gonna go big!" The Soldier laughed, as he closed the door behind him on his way out, leaving a very confused Scout in his wake, and two seemingly very lazy ponies who continued to peacefully sleep in their self appointed parts of the room.
Scout quickly put on all his clothes, tied his shoes, and slung his bag over his shoulder, before running outside, and closing the door behind him.
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"IIIIINNNNNCOOOOOMMIIIIIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGGGG!!!" A large, muscular Russian man in red bellowed over the chaos of the bullets being fired between the two teams, before getting shot straight in the head, and falling over, dead.
"Heavy down!" The Soldier proclaimed, reloading his rocket launcher. "Someone get that Sniper!" He said, pointing up at the Sniper's watch spot, before almost getting a fate similar to the heavy weapon's man. He quickly took cover again
"I am fully charged!" The Medic proclaimed for anyone nearby. The Soldier voluntarily got up for this chance, exposing his back fully.
"Ready for that charge, Doct-AAAAAAARGGHHH, MY SPIIIIINNNEEEEE!" The Soldier had gotten back stabbed, as he fell over his cover, now dead.
"I never really was on your side..." the Blu Spy said, as he got rid of his disguise, flicking his used up cigarette and replacing it. The spy looked around, the coast was clear for now, and he began running into the Red's base, disguised as the Soldier he just killed.
He passed some of his 'teammates', giving them a small cheer of encouragement, as he delved deeper into enemy territory.
Then, the Spy stopped by a certain room, which had two, large double doors. He knew this to be the Scout's room, because it's in the exact same place as on their side of the battlefield...but he could have sworn he heard...talking from inside...
The Spy adjusted his mask, and walked in, only to be surprised by the two colorful ponies, which stopped their conversation and looked straight at the Soldier.
They both stared at each other, dumbfounded. The ponies saw through the Blu Spy's disguise, and the Blu Spy was looking at multicolored ponies, with wings or a unicorn horn.
Then, they both freaked out, as the ponies zoomed out of the room and past the Spy, as he screamed in fright and covered himself in defense.
Soon after, Twilight and Fluttershy stopped themselves to get a breather. They were in the basement level, as far as they knew. "Phew! That was close!" Twilight said, obviously shaken.
Fluttershy could only mumble out a silent "Yeah", before looking around, confused about where they were. "Um, Twilight, where are we...?" She asked, hoping her friend would know.
"I have no idea Fluttershy, but we're probably in the basement of the house...We should go investigate and see if there's somepony...or...something here that's willing to protect us..." Twilight said, looking around again. She saw three hallways, and just picked one, going deeper into the basement...
And what she saw horrified her.
hmm, very interesting so far...
Like always, great chapter, yet I still wonder, why are they so calm when one of their teammates dies? Is it like the game, and they can respawn, or..?
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They can respawn. You can't expect them all to be alive for 6 years, without a single one of them dying. They've all died at least once to know that when you die, you will come back, knowing full well that you had died, and accepting the fact that you did.
I actually have a couple of questions about a cetain part of this chapter. One, when Scout kicked fluttershy, do you mean that he "bumped into" kicked or "kicked" kicked? Two, when Scout gets pecked by the bird, why does he say that Archemides doesn't even peck that hard? Wasn't that Archemides?
I'm luvin dis
I'm sending in the packages of encouragement and requesting a tactical MOAR.
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It's more of a "Bumped into" kick, and that could be any of Medic's many birds, Medic has three of em, so you can't exactly 100% tell that that was the real Archimedes...
well, except you do because I told you that it was Archimedes, but the characters themselves don't know that...
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TACTICAL MOAR INCOMING,
"ENEMY AC130 ABOOOOOOOVE!"
2635482 Thanks for the clarification. Also I want to say that I love how you write the characters. Especially Fluttershy. The fact that every sentence doesn't end in "if that's okay with you" pleases me to no end. It's just so much more natural and closer to the show the way you write.
MORE!
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Oh...well alrighty then! C:
Or he could have shield? Actually, it's sworn
... ... ... Wait, that's it? ... Vast improvement in every aspect so far, keep going!
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Not bad so far, although each chapter seems a little short. Maybe a little rushed. But who cares what I think, keep it up!
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Huh. Wunderbar, meine Kolleginnen und Gentleman Schriftsteller. Or, German for Wonderful, my gentlemannly fellow writer. Either way, very, very good job. Now,let us see what happens next, hmm?
Needs more ponies freaking out. Can't wait. Also I found Archimedes.
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*slapshine gun* That it isn't known doesn't mean there isn't a right answer! BLARGH
Work Dammit! But seriously nice job with the accents, i struggle writing those
I luv eet!
But what did Twilight see that horrified her? Medic's workshop, perhaps?
Cant wait for next chapter
Meh, this story is alright. Nothing grand, but atleast its readable.
да, Komrade, dees veel be very good. IIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNCCCCOOOOMMMMMIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG MOAR CHAPTERZ! GET BEHIND ME, DOKTOR!
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They respawn
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Of course they respawn. It's still TF2 after all. Good story by the way. Got my like and fav
ja, JA, JAAAAAAAA!
These comments... My brain...
Please continue.
I finally got around to reading this, and might I say, good job. I eagerly await your next chapter.
Quick question: why are the Reds so concerned about the ponies knowing about their past when they're openly running around gleefully shooting each other in the face? I'd think that would be somewhat more likely to scare them off.
Short chapters with a quick update schedule are fine, but they tend to make things rushed and sometimes unclear. You're doing a good job so far, but be careful not to get ahead of yourself.
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i didnt even read the story, but i like the title cover picture, and if you join my group the harmoniests, ill favorite it plus this is on the hot story list so be proud favorite my 1 story plz!!!!!!!!!!
2631746 What happened to bronies being all about "LOVE AND TOLERATE" :/ so what if i play Roblox... thats Exactly like how haters hate bronies for watching MLP:FIM therefore making you on the same level as them...
2634320 Lol
What map are they at?
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That's just your opinion against mine, pal,
All i'm saying is that I don't like Roblox, not like I'm gonna kick you from my story or whatever. It's just some kind of call of duty hang out for people, as far as I can tell. The last few times I went on, lots of people were swearing things at each other.
and I thought Roblox was suppose to be kid friendly, but we can't say that about everything that's supposed to be about everything...
Like how legos are fun, but in fact are not fun at all when you step on them...
You also have all the right to be mad at me for the way I reacted, because it was a bit childish on my part... sorry
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They are on 2fort
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"Just another day at the office."
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"Ah yes the map known for its basically never-ending stalemate."
2643695 I agree that roblox is getting VERY CORRUPTED and the admins need to put a stop to that so when i get old enough im gonna apply for a job and HOPEFULLY... fix that prob... but you can find places that are nice... and dont include shooting i like to roleplay to tell the truth...
Heres my account :P
Casey
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thanks for the account, but I probably won't add you. I don't go on Roblox anymore
2644093 i know i was proving something.... to bad you will nevar know what!
I\I0\/\/ g1mm13 y0ur 4cc0un7 pl0x!11!11!1
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You should write longer chapters, oh and DON'T Traumatize Twilight, or Fluttershy, it just wouldn't make sense, Twilight being under the teaching of a immortal princess. Twilight and fluttershy (with the other four) that defeated Nightmare Moon, Discord, King Sombra, etc.
So don't try anything funky, i'm a very good Ambassador spy.
2641292 A bit of TF2 lore is what you need, go look it up :)
(Oh, and i would also turn tail and run knowing that the soldier blew up villages and slaughtered populations, and that the medic somehow managed to lose every single bone of his patients body)
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and I'm a very good pyro
but in all seriousness, that wasn't what I was gonna do at all.
Ever seen a video game everyone has labeled as the worst game ever and you realize that by complete mistake you actually bought it?
Yeah....
It should be a little something like that...
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AND ZEN ZE DOKTOR VAS NEVER HEARD FROM AGAIN!
anyvay, zat vas how I lost my medical license
2644992 Hmm, i can tolerate that, and pyros are my favorite pray, you see i also use the Spy-cicle with a Deadringer.
And remember this: If you screw up, be sure to patch it up.
2645003 Three out of five mustaches good sir... Know what? have four...
2645003 Oh, and i'm the kind that likes to spam, but you should take some reading tips from this story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/79479/1/mordane-stronghoof
Just in the way it was written and how long the chapters are and how much dedication that went into it, if you do that, i'll give you... 6/5 Big Mac's!
Oh, and you don't have to do it full out, just slightly.
2645011 You have gained my appreciations, Sir Informant
You may now carry on with whatever disastrous deed you might have been plotting against my brethren of the Gentlemanly and the Pyrotechnical combatants, whilst I gather up the fake knowledge of "There was nothing we can do but carry on with our duty and keep thy enemy away from thy area of capture, so that we may remain victorious among our rivals."
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Continue to possess thy excellence of thy day