This is an odd story that has some real attempt at storytelling, but I couldn't resist adding some clop to it.
WHAT THE HECK?! I thought she was an earth pony/ zebra! How does she manage a sonic rain boom without wings?!
I think there needs to be an epilogue so we can further understand this fic.
WHAT THE HECK?! I thought she was an earth pony/ zebra! How does she manage a sonic rain boom without wings?!
I think there needs to be an epilogue so we can further understand this fic.