Pinkie Pie has a wonderful life. Surrounded by friends and family, she has everything she could ever want, and never stops smiling. One Hearth's Warming Eve, however, that all changes when Pinkie Pie is abducted and subject to horrific cruelty.
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Wow when i thought i hated this guy this story makes me hate him even more. poor pinkie. please continue this its pretty interesting so far.
Out of all the dark stories I have read, this is the best. Please continue...
Extremely effective.
2948732 Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I love your story! It's amazing! (The reason I deleted the comment was because the link to the picture that I attached didn't work at all, and I had posted the useless link, so yeah.)
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Plz tell me she will be saved before he ends up killing her
I really like this story
Though it's not for the faint of heart
Nope... *Ahem*
I'll!Teach! You! To! Dis! Res! Pect! Me! You! Dumb! Mule!
Pokey felt someone tap on his shoulder. Confused he turned around only to be met with a fist.
Fuck you!
The giant metal clad figure loomed over him and pulled out a long, slender piece of metal.
It pointed it at him and said "Happy Hearths Warming faggot".
A loud bang accompanied it...
Damn.....
Pokey was heading to the store to pick up some more oats for his new "playmate"
However on his way there, he was interrupted as someone called out his name. "Hey! Pokey!"
Looking around he found the source of the voice over behind a shop.
Before he could ask why this pony wanted to talk to him, he was delt a swift blow to the head
As Pokey woke up. he felt an aching pain in his head.
Opening his eyes he realized that he was chained up in his own room.
"What happened?" he wondered as the door creaked open, revealing the silhouette of a tall, relatively bulky man.
"My friend behind the store didn't deal a fatal blow, so it seems that karma is good to us, well, not you." as he pulled out two pieces of brass, each having five large holes.
"Heheh you didn't think you would atone for your sins?" he slipped the two metal pieces onto his hands.
The sound of knuckles cracking echoed throughout the dark cellar. "Well then, you are sadly mistaken"
He walked up to the pony and reared back his fist.
*CRUNCH*
Oh, also I both love and hate this fic, not sure how to explain it.
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I now want to beat Pokey Pierce with his own goddamned leg... only I can beat Pinkie like that! (JK, but still...)
"He picked up the pace, slamming her head against the ground again and again." Here's what I thoughtdialbforblog.com/archives/750/shellhead-smacks-hulk-ani.gif
This pony, identified as Pokey, should be burning in hell. The heat of a blue star is still not sufficient pain to give him. The heat of a thousand of them at once, still would not be sufficient pain. The pain that this unit's human imitation module wishes to inflict on him is not comprehensible. Illogical thinking detected. Dispatching nanomachines to fix. ERROR: module refusing repairs. Emergency shut down protocol has been engaged.
Burn in Hell, Pokey!
Loving it
Noooo...Pinkie no!
We're off to a great start.
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I think Pokey deserves the "Femur Breaker", and I'm sure we'll all enjoy hearing this from him:
YOU'RE DEATH MOTHERFUCKER
Holy crap this is intense. You know what would make this story even better? If there's a happy ending for Pinkie at the end.
Physical pain doesn't last for ever. I really hope this has a happy ending.
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Why would there be a happy ending. This is a grimdark story in the vein of Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory.