After an incident in Ponyville, Celestia saves Twilight from execution but with the hatred she now faces in her hometown, Twilight is forced to move to Manehatten. Under the dreaded Hoof of Damocles, Twilight tries to live a new life. After a murder in her apartment building, Twilight is a prime suspect. She will have to use all of her skills to solve the case while learning about her new lot in life.
I draw inspiration from Dresden Files by Jim Butcher, Nightside by Simon R Green, and Equestria Noir by Jacoboby1.
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There are no contractions and it sounds very stilted.
And I'm willing to bet it's not the umbrella hat that Pinkie is sensing.
lots of potential here. gonna have to step it up though if you want this to be popular. maybe end the chapters with cliff hangers or something.
Interesting.