Pain of Love
written by King Artermis
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needs work but I will follow
There are many spelling misspellings and incorrect word useage. It's a nice beginning, though the discription made me thought that Lunar wanted to cause harm to Luna. Somewhat of a twist!
hey ther i will check it with my friends for the errors and word usage
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. Just pm the mistakes to me.
Exactly what I was going for