... Go on.

Nothing I can say will describe how hot that was.

So I leave you with a creepy Pinkie smile at the spectacle.

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I don't think Cadence's entrance could have been more perfect.

Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, do-ing what they shouldn't be~
~Starts with S, ends with X, oh dear Celestia it must be sex!~

need more

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This. This is my reaction...

Once again......Damn...

pretty good

And things get better.

2539722 my thoughts precisely

Cadence trotted gaily into the room, singing to herself. “Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, do-ing what they shouldn't be~”

OMG, Cadence, you fucking troll...

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That's what I thought as well.

more pls

Eeyup gonna have to fave this one.

2562327 Hey, if you get there first, can you save me a seat. I hear that hell gets really crowded reAlly fast.

2611238 I know there is a lot of incest in the Bible even though it says incest is wrong and you'll burn in hell for it, then again the Bible also says that the Earth is flat, it's a silly book :D there is also some gay sex if I recall... didn't one of Moses sons have sex with him while Moses was hammered (which BTW is also a sin recording to the Bible, I mean being drunk and having gay sex)?

2583672 No prob brah :)

Hows chrysalis inolved though? It says chrysalis is in this...... Missslabeled! This fic is in UNACCEPTABLE CONDITION! UNACCEPTALBE! I wanted to see changling pussy.....
(favs anyway)

That was without a doubt the best thing I've read all night.

"Shining and Twilight sitting in a tree, doing stuff that they shouldn't be~
~Starts with S, ends with X, oh my Celestia it must be sex."

I'm only down voting it because it feels rough, dispite liking a lot of it, and the little "twiligh and shining sitting in a tree" number made me laugh my ass off. Unfortunately as I said, it felt sub par, and some parts were too rushed along to get engaged into the story, I think you need to stretch out this first chapter more with past experiences WHY they're together, and shining seems to accept twilight being there in a non nonchalant way rather than "rushed into it because he's turned on.

Feel free to ignore me but just felt you deserved a reason for a downvote when I don't mean to imply I hate it.

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I'm very sorry. At the time it was put up I wasn't sure if I could add/remove characters in an edit. She is prominent in chapter 3 but that's taking a while since I write very slowly.

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Thanks for the post! I understand what you mean, this was an attempt to write a 'simple clopfic' while only including the barest bones of backstory. With more plot it would be pretending to be something that it isn't.

As weird as it may sound, I enjoy fictional incest. Makes for a good story.