Three characters looking towards the the reader in the train light

The train with different characters watching being scared

Custom idea (tell below)

Let me know what you think.

Yeah, it sucks, but better than nothing.

Now for the big question
You can pick multiple answers

Hope you enjoy this one

Where I did a full flashback for Hope, I'm not sure if I should do that for Crimson.

Did Hope's bore you?
If I do this for Crimson, what do you think I should do?
He's only mentioning his wife and some of what he did before so far, but how would you like the flashback?

I'm trying to make Crimson left of a jerk to Twilight, but at the same time, having a no nonsense attitude due to him wanting to get the engine moving asap.

Enjoy

password is 104

need to get some opinions real quick. Publish will be Monday

take a look

Opinions please before I publish chapter later

Had to use a google image for now, but hopefully I can get a good one in the future

Got any ideas?

Enjoy

Feel free to enjoy it

And I'm glad for it.

Now to get onto fixing everything.

Anyone willing to help?

Just need to make a few quick edits

Take a look

Had to mark out the Pony stuff, but it was a very good story.

Turns out that they loved the intro and wanted to know how it ended.

Maybe writing some horror/comedy should be my thing, but don't want to copy R.L.S

I was thinking of turning it into a collection of horror with my fiancee writing some stories as well. She's always a horror person.

What do you think?

Here's what I got so far.

Let me know what you think