New Story! · 4:20pm May 27th, 2019
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just premiered today! Set in the same story verse as the story that just finished, Prince of Errors. (Previous knowledge is not required)
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just premiered today! Set in the same story verse as the story that just finished, Prince of Errors. (Previous knowledge is not required)
Anypony out there? Quiet Saturday. I need my comments!
Would you accept the offer to become Vinyl Scratch? Huh, seems she already has a coltfriend. Said coltfriend understands you weren't Vinyl Scratch before, but just wants you to be his marefriend, have fun, and generally enjoyed the married life.
Cooking and cleaning skills are a strong plus.
Room and board promised, along with the chance to be Vinyl Scratch.
Active musicians need not apply.
I made an oopsie in the latest chapter. It's been revised. It's all in the last scene.
Well, I just got feedback that makes my motion forward suddenly feel awkward.
Let me share!
These chapters are right on the tipping point between not enough and too much.
If you're building a stable of pseudo-background victims, this is too much. As in too much of a shell around the information. I would personally recommend putting together all the victims you intend and push them all into one or two chapters.
So, there it is. A poorly-made website promising you can be the pony you want to be! It has a selection of ponies to choose from at that. Most of them seem to be background ponies. Some of them have little notes beside them like:
Must like muffins
Or
Happily married
Or even
Expect danger and adventure!
Holy moly. I don't see ratios that bad often, certainly not on my stories... what happened? As per usual, not a single peep came from the comment section. 9:4? Really? I see it being added to favorites, but I assume folks are not so quick to click the upvote button. I'm more curious why the downs? Help a brother understand.