Crime Pays Improvements · 2:02pm May 2nd, 2017
Stories have flaws. That's just a fact of life. That said, I feel like Crime Pays was pretty solid. Sure it was bumpy, particularly around the latter third of the story, but I'm overall quite proud of it. That doesn't mean I couldn't have done it better, mind you, and I'd like to know how I could have done just that. Whathe bits of the story did you not care for? Where do you think I dropped the ball? There are three things in particular I'm concerned about.