S Ninja is at it again, this time with a masterful reading of Twilight is Annoyed.

If you've never read it before, I recommend reading along as he reads, because the way I wrote it can be a little confusing if you don't see how the text is formatted.

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I did some pretty heavy grammar, punctuation, and general story flow edits to my story Twilight is Annoyed . I think it works a little better now, and man did I mess up punctuation the first time around.

This is one of my favorites I've written, so I'd love it if a few more people took a look at it.