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Oct
13th
2015

Twilight is Annoyed · 9:23pm Oct 13th, 2015

I did some pretty heavy grammar, punctuation, and general story flow edits to my story Twilight is Annoyed . I think it works a little better now, and man did I mess up punctuation the first time around.

This is one of my favorites I've written, so I'd love it if a few more people took a look at it.

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I'll definitely give it another read! I loved this story!

AND ADVENTURE CLYDE IS RUINED FOREVER

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