Twilight is Annoyed · 9:23pm Oct 13th, 2015
I did some pretty heavy grammar, punctuation, and general story flow edits to my story Twilight is Annoyed . I think it works a little better now, and man did I mess up punctuation the first time around.
This is one of my favorites I've written, so I'd love it if a few more people took a look at it.
I'll definitely give it another read! I loved this story!
AND ADVENTURE CLYDE IS RUINED FOREVER
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