Will it be spoilers... or merely a teasing of what is to arrive soon?
Dusk shook his head as he gazed at the town he loved and held dear. The sun was shining overhead, ponies were all smiling and waving to him. He felt… calm here. But something was amiss here. The air carried a certain thickness with it. A humid type feeling breezed by his nose. He wasn’t the only one to notice it, for the ponyville residents seemed a bit under the weather, mostly the mares.
So the story aspect on 4FvDS is done... as in... the dialogue, the story itself and including the final chapter along with epilogue.
The clop is still what keeps me from publishing it and that is it. So ideas..... ?
Help? Pitch ins? anything?
I can't do the clop, but I have an idea of where to go, just can write it it all out.
Chrysalis and Silhouette are the ones that are left. I need those done to close out this series.
So, I have half the story of FVvDS half way done...
Problem is... I need help with the smut. Now, a lot of people commented how Eris chapter was dark to a point where it killed the mood and I half wondered were it went wrong. (Comment below how it went wrong)
The lack positive feedback on FVvDS had been on the low end with negative hitting my p.m.
I won't give names but a lot of people felt that the chapter was lack or too dark. Was the clip bad or the characters? Editing?
Sorry to break my promise in trying to do all these stories but the fact that all my previous editors haven't responded yet to my PMs, im a little short hooved so to speak Bad puns aside... i really need help.
Dragon's consort is on the finishing stages for the next chapters but i need someone to help me flush out what is to come.
How, i know you are all waiting for the anxious return of this story and here is what i have so far.
I have previously asked four random artists to write a single clop fic for each villianess with dusk. That way it is four different writing styles.
Okay, 1. ..... I apologize from the bottom of my heart about this delay. I would like to say that for the last six months, my life has been through a 180 for the better!
I have a new job with my own time, my own schedule my own pace and with more free time then ever! So no stress, no hassle that causes major delays!
Okay so, i tried to continue with 4VVDS and that being... i honestly dont know how to do this paticular scene.
Now, i have reached up to a certain point but cant go on, which is why the story hasn't come out. It was planned to come out last week but... i can't.
Its not any kind of block but at the same time, i just continue to add stuff that do no belong there. Some stuff dosen't need to go there and if i tried to type, more bull gets in the way.
I know i am late with this but this one was a bit more difficult to do. It honestly was never planned but in order to ensure that it was a necessary asset for the story, i expanded this by a whole another chapter which is this one. Heres a little... taste
Wow.... 600 likes on Villainesses vs Dusk Shine.... wow.... to be quiet honest, this was supposed to be a huge farce and not a good one at that.
I thought that this wouldn't go far but the amount of requests and like and overwhelming need for more. With all this and the comedy to add to it, I though it wouldn't go far but yet here we are!