The resemblance was just uncanny, but I know it was just a coincident. Still, new readers are going to think I totally think I copied the Hasbro Team. I really like this story and was planing on continuing it after school end and I'm more relaxed. What should I do?

I got to say I'm a little nervous. Not since My Mortal Big Brother has a story I written gotten this much attention this quickly. I always aim to please, but I always worry about slipping up. Is the chapter to short? Is there to much dialogue and not enough action? Are the characters, in character? Also, just a quick heads up, the first deprecation takes place in this chapter, and there is blood. I felt like even though it's a comedy, I should keep a scene of drama to the story.

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