Good god, it's awful.

The writing did get better as the chapters progressed, but man....

(it's like reading the words of a special needs child....shhhh! don't tell me! what I don't know won't hurt me!)

Done by RazieFim. Go check out her DeviantArt page!

It's a nice little relaunch of my OC. I'm very pleased with it. I do believed it was commissioned by iakovl.

Thank you very much

Compare Razie's vision to one of my origonal works:

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