I just re-read one of my early stories... · 12:43pm Jan 20th, 2016
Good god, it's awful.
The writing did get better as the chapters progressed, but man....
(it's like reading the words of a special needs child....shhhh! don't tell me! what I don't know won't hurt me!)
Yeah, but still quite an interesting story... Quite a few excellent concepts like the chief bad guy (whatever his names is, just a big black dragon mad scientist/mage is all I remember), Twilight being a bad mother (a really good one) and all the work with details of Changeling society... (while the Halfling rendition being better just a tiny bit) And the discreet human reference... If you made a rewrite, the story would be really good... And the thing with crippled Tia also good... I did like it when I read it some time ago... It wasn't that bad... At least you can see how better you got over time! Not many people like to poke in to alicorn back story stuff here... That is the other reason I like it... (and Luna of course!) Just don't be hard on yourself, like 90% of Fimfiction is junk... Millions of words just being junk... While being quite bad these 2.1 stories doesn't belong in those percents. (in my opinion of course, cause everything is relevant and all that stuff)
I remember reading the first few chapters of the Dragonking. I thought it was good. :)