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Scarheart


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  • 183 weeks
    Quick Update

    I do apologize for not getting the next chapter of The Light of a Candle out, but I've been preparing for the upcoming move and just haven't made the time to write. I've been debating on which perspective to go with and it's been kind of annoying.

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  • 185 weeks
    Who's on Eekum Bokum?

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  • 186 weeks
    Chapter 20 Update (I promise, it's the last one)

    Chapter is now being beaten to death like the dead horse topics we love to argue over. Pick a topic, and I'll drag out the corpse.

    Should be out tonight!

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    1 comments · 350 views
  • 187 weeks
    Chapter 20 Update

    3300 words so far. I haven't forgotten. There were some changes I wanted to work through for one of the characters. I was not happy with the original concept and decided to delve a bit into Greek myth for inspiration. I hope you like it when I do publish the chapter. It's not done. There's one last bit to do for it before I ship it off to my editors for ridicule. I do apologize for the delay, but

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  • 187 weeks
    Picked Up a Real Estate Agent

    And so it begins...
    The great house hunt of our time.

    I'm super excited being able to go out and buy a home after two years of paying rent!

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    5 comments · 236 views
Jan
20th
2016

I just re-read one of my early stories... · 12:43pm Jan 20th, 2016

Good god, it's awful.

The writing did get better as the chapters progressed, but man....

(it's like reading the words of a special needs child....shhhh! don't tell me! what I don't know won't hurt me!)

Report Scarheart · 306 views · Story: Rise of the Dragonking ·
Comments ( 2 )

Yeah, but still quite an interesting story... Quite a few excellent concepts like the chief bad guy (whatever his names is, just a big black dragon mad scientist/mage is all I remember), Twilight being a bad mother (a really good one) and all the work with details of Changeling society... (while the Halfling rendition being better just a tiny bit) And the discreet human reference... If you made a rewrite, the story would be really good... And the thing with crippled Tia also good... I did like it when I read it some time ago... It wasn't that bad... At least you can see how better you got over time! Not many people like to poke in to alicorn back story stuff here... That is the other reason I like it... (and Luna of course!) Just don't be hard on yourself, like 90% of Fimfiction is junk... Millions of words just being junk... While being quite bad these 2.1 stories doesn't belong in those percents. (in my opinion of course, cause everything is relevant and all that stuff)

I remember reading the first few chapters of the Dragonking. I thought it was good. :)

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