Beethoven's Tenth Sequal · 1:57am Aug 17th, 2017
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,
Currently, I am going to be focusing on “The Lioness and the Unicorn” for a while until the thing is finished. But in the mean time, I have been thinking about stories that I may do once that story is done. To which, I want to get some of your opinions on the idea that I came up with today.
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters who've read "Beethoven's Tenth,"
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,
I suppose by now that you're probably wondering why I haven't posted a new chapter for little over a week. That you might be thinking that I've suddenly lost interest or something along those lines. Well, I'm posting this because I wanted to tell you all something.
Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,
After about a week of going through the entire story, of correcting contradictions, adding new details, sentences and paragraphs while rewriting the other half of the previous chapter, I'm relieved to say that it is done. By tomorrow, I can finally begin to work on the next chapter, that is, unless if Ryvaken has any objections.
Your fellow writer and closeted Brony,
- CrackedInkWell.
Okay, before anyone panic's, just hear me out on this.
As of today, the user Ryvaken, after some discussion, have given me some constructive criticism about the story. You see, he basically pointed out that there were a few plot holes that needed to be fixed, which are:
- There's a lack of emphasis of writing the Tenth symphony and Ludwig's obsession to get home is unrealistic.