Slightly Rewriting of Beethoven's Tenth · 1:57am Oct 1st, 2016
Okay, before anyone panic's, just hear me out on this.
As of today, the user Ryvaken, after some discussion, have given me some constructive criticism about the story. You see, he basically pointed out that there were a few plot holes that needed to be fixed, which are:
- There's a lack of emphasis of writing the Tenth symphony and Ludwig's obsession to get home is unrealistic.
- The antagonist, the Shadow, needs to be rewrite because it's a dull character.
With these ideas in mind, we've come to a compromise in which there's a workable way to strengthen the story. This means that I'm going to have to look back at the whole story from the first chapter on to either add or rewrite a few bits here and there without changing too much of the story that I already have.
So don't worry, once I do, then the story from there will flow much more smoothly.
Could you post another blog post when you are finished?
4235034 Fair enough.
4235037
Thanks!
4235034 First eight chapters down, twenty-seven to go.
4236367
Cool!