The next chapter for Crippled, Beaten and Broken is out and it is, in my opinion, the chapter that could really make people angry, the game changer, the saddest chapter yet, as promised.

Just a heads up, this is the one that I hope you don't get mad at me for. There's no mean-ass twist, Ryan doesn't become evil again, there's no big bad that's just revealed itself, it's just.....it was just hard to write. This might cause a big deal of controversy.

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Most of the rest of these chapters will be from the Pony's POV, just thought I'd let y'all know.

Can someone review my latest story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/212984/crippled-beaten-and-broken? It's my first M-rated story and the darkest story that I've written to date.

I'd love some opinions on it.