i edited chapter 2 of a thing. · 7:04pm Jul 30th, 2021
tadaaaaaa
no clue if it's gonna be an improvement in any way or not 'cause I've never liked the weird feeling I get when working on a fic featuring real people.
tadaaaaaa
no clue if it's gonna be an improvement in any way or not 'cause I've never liked the weird feeling I get when working on a fic featuring real people.
Though the story itself is on hiatus, that doesn't stop me from going back and rereading my own work. While rereading my old work, I've decided that it was oh-so stupid. I wasn't (and still not) a confident writer so reading back is like a cringe compilation for me. However, I do not have a lot of time on my hands, so it's not like I could rewrite everything.
This story has finally been edited! Most of it is changes in grammar and sentence formation, but I have also added paragraphs that change certain parts of the story. This is probably the most fun I’ve ever had editing , so thank you to those who offered tips on how to make this story better. The story will be embedded for anyone interested in seeing the changes.
Whoop, I haven't written a blog post for some time, so now's a good time to do so. I'm still alive and around, dw.
I started a new story entitled My Brush is Finer than My Sword. Teen-rated, Adventure, and Violence. Not a sequel to Diary of a Young Griff.
Hello everyone.
I'm currently in the process of getting a new PC, due to the fact that my current one crashes almost daily now. In the meantime, for the next two weeks, story updates may slow down a bit, editing stories will definitely slow down due to the fact that I'm back to my old laptop, and commissions, just like other stories, will see slower updates.
You've read that right, Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday is undergoing some adjustments. Nothing plot wise is changing, grammar updates as I run into them, but I have learned of a word that better clarifies Lady Merry Sapphire's job.
So some of you may be wondering where updates for any of my stories have been, especially my most popular story Rainbow Sentai Harmonyranger. The honest truth is that my muse has been moved to more classic superheroes in non-pony related stories; characters like Spider-Man, Superman, crosses of them, that sort of thing. As such my desire to continue some of my stories has dwindled, not dead, just...less.
I haven't done this in a while. How does it work again?
Oh, right. A foreword or something to get your attention. Well, I've been working on the upcoming chapter for mlaabq, if a bit idly. I have been turning it around in my head for quite a while, and I think that's an important part of the process, at least for me. So, you know, still working on it, but it's not ready yet, and it could take a while if I'm gonna write two or three shorter chapters in addition to chapter 23.
Hello to all who read this blog!
I know that I didn't post a new Dawn chapter in a long time, but I do a lot of editing in the last few weeks. Since I started writing myself last year I learned a lot about it and I always found something new to improve on. That's why I edit through the chapters of my other story, The Secrets of Equestria, like a mad man right now. Rewriting dialogues, looking out that a balance of Show and Tell is given, well, for me at least.
I've re-opened my editing service! I won't charge for editing on stories up to 10,000 words, but afterwards, every 5,000 words will cost $10 in Amazon e-gift cards. 'Cause I need the money. High-schooler money problems, y'know?
Hi everyone. I have gotten some feedback that my grammar for the first few chapters is atrocious, and yes, I know it is. I'm in the process of editing it and if the grammar was the only reason to stop you from reading my story, then I implore you to give it another try. Thank you and good day.
I finally went back and changed Giving Up for, hopefully, the better. There were a lot of errors that I found and a few things I had to change based on the comments and errors I found in general.
I changed the title as the person who "commissioned" it decided not to pay so I'm just going to treat it as my work again. Despite that, I hope the changes provide more context and a better reading experience for you all.
Hey I'm making a little edit in Little Dragon Daycare, its nothing too big. I'm just changing the name of Fluttershys parents to Posey for her mother and Gentle for her father.
Hey guys.. I know it's been a very long time. And guess what guys, I'm looking for an editor. Soo, if any of you are still aware of my page, then feel free to PM me here. I'd love to even chat if you'd like. I don't really have any explanation for my absence but here we go again. Please message me if you have any skill in editing, or would just like to chat.
LostInSpace, out.
Next chapter of The Pale Alicorn is ready! Looking for pre-reading right now - particularly with pacing, coherency, and paragraph/sentence flow.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dRZRKjUx-PIe4cNZjCwpRwzMJ9RSJfZYgPv6nF0QHiI/edit?usp=drivesdk
Hey!
I've got some slots open for editing commissions right now, $8USD per 1,000 words at the moment. If that's a thing you want, PM me.
I don't like being upfront about this, but please don't try to negotiate the price down if you can't afford that, I'm already starting at the lowest I can go for the time I put into the work. Thank you.
Well thanks to randomly going on FIMFiction again I plan to try and continue Skyfall and will be making a change to it that shouldn't be all that big. I plan to change the sexual assault of Celestia to a beating because it still portrays powerlessness and I can write and portray it better now and anytime it is referenced and thinking on it I don't know why I chose something so extreme as I did anyway thanks to any who follow me and maybe I can see this to the end this time.